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Author Name: Freefanofjims 7 Comments
Date Added: April 19, 2007 22:04:12 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Door of Evermore~9

The Door of Evermore


 


Iíll tell you about things that most wonít say


Events surrounding our lives nearly everyday


Some stories of the ugly and some of the beauty


I write about existence and feel like itís my duty


 


Iím trying to help a few view true reality


Between the future and the past of humanity


Iím writing for you and Iím writing for them


So donít you call me sir you can call me Jim


 


Iím no one special at all just an average guy


But I can make you question and wonder why


For our time is much shorter than we all think


While life and death have a unique special link


 


There are many things hidden in front of our eyes


There are eyes viewing from above the skies


So escape into the shadows of a moment before


We entered this world from the door of Evermore

Author's Notes:
This one is from the pages of my newest manuscript~
The Journey~Back to the Beginning
It will be my my 9th book in this collection!
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on May 26, 2007 07:30:49 AM Report
Very beautiful, deep and imaginative poem dear friend......Carry on!
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on May 14, 2007 08:02:24 PM Report

Your on to something with your average guy peotry.  I believe that is why so many readers can connect to your lines and often leave with a lump in their throats. 


Comment By: FreeRichard Michael Cronin on May 5, 2007 09:51:30 AM Report
This is a interesting write, thought provoking theme. I think death is just a transformation like a caterpillar to a butterfly, physical to spirit.And that time is not linaer but, everything happens in Gods enternal now. And this universe is just one of many, anyway great stuff, your work James. keep on trucking! peace!
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on April 30, 2007 08:26:56 AM Report
As poets, this is our job. Life and death complete the circle and we should write about it. As always James, thought provoking and also an incredible piece, Joe
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 20, 2007 06:52:26 PM Report
Well, Jim..You have said a mouthful here. Einstien said that the past, present and future are all happening at once. The passage of time is a convinient illusion. The truth is out there. I'm afraid our puny brains are not up to the task of knowing it, though. A very thoughtful write..len
Comment By: FreeGlata on April 20, 2007 08:02:20 AM Report
So much is hidden because we refuse to look and see it. The phrase "hidden in plain sight" has never been more  true than it is today. Look at the events at Virginia Tech just this week...This kid  was a danger to these other people long before he ever pulled that trigger the first time. Right there in plain sight was evidence for those  so-called "professionals" to have seen, had they but listened to concerned students...

James, this is a very good write and hopefully it will inspire us all to look a little deeper.....

Hugs and love from your NC sis...

Glata

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on April 20, 2007 02:46:13 AM Report
A very interesting write James and one I enjoyed.




 


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