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Author Name: FreeJune26 3 Comments
Date Added: April 17, 2007 17:04:06 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Needle Rises
As the needle rises
his eyes slowly fall
the poision shrapnals his body
a drop of blood rolls down his cheek
 
yet he cannot see it only I can
It drips flowing into a puddle
Running fast towards my feet
I sit there crystal tears streaming down my face
 
Then my crystal tears hits the blood and turns it deeper red
As the infections go faster and seem painless
The blood turns into black stone
My tears repelled by this poision
 
It toils with his mind emotions, and concentration
It is the dark hell
I wish my crystal tears would break the black stone
But it is too powerful.....
 And now the black stone has broke me
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAntony Frank on June 25, 2007 07:30:12 AM Report
Interesting poem, very dark, but enjoyable.

 

Antony.

Comment By: FreeRichard Michael Cronin on May 5, 2007 11:11:15 AM Report
Very good walk on the dark side!
Comment By: Freebloodtear on May 3, 2007 01:26:56 AM Report
awesome poem, with some great visual metaphores. indeed very dark write.

Good luck with your pregnancy!





 


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