Depends On You by RichardM

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		Date Added: April 17, 2007 01:04:48	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Depends On You

Within this universe,
Many are the random moments,
That never again will be,
Yet knowledge derives from past.

Stars travel and entwine,
Spin, dance, and combine.
Planets tend their children,
Alive on borrowed time.

Their tide delicately unravels,
A child's sand castle.
This unique product of imagination,
Lost for all of time.

Child of the morning star,
You inquire about the future.
What could be more perfect,
Than the tangents we follow?

You ask how things will be,
Through gulfs of space and time.
Yet there is little else,
On which truly you can depend...

Besides that special feeling,
When uniquely you know,
The next moment, my love,
Depends on you.

Author's Notes:

8/29/06

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	Comment By: Merv on June 12, 2012 02:29:15 PM	Report
	Our thoughts and sentiments expressed truely. Enjoyed reading Merv Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: The Bag Lady on June 25, 2010 06:40:49 PM	Report
	Richard....I am so pleased that I found this well-written words of Universe wisdom this afternoon....Your presentation even brings it to light....Great rhyme and meter, dear friend...I have missed ya'....Wish we could have a new and wonderful write???...Will be watching for one... Enjoyable.....Margaret.... Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Leila on May 28, 2010 12:18:30 AM	Report
	hi, It's a usual and not so wounderful poem but I enjoy reading it... Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Bruce A. Peaslee on May 18, 2010 08:52:14 AM	Report
	Richard, I like this work, the human experience, and what we each derive from it is fascinatingly different and intriguing. ---Poetrydad--- Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Raymond Pinsonneault on November 19, 2008 07:35:06 PM	Report
	This one is definitely one of your best.. going into my favorites...what more can I say.. thank you...love it. Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Bruce A. Peaslee on November 4, 2008 11:52:43 AM	Report
	Richard - The sentiments are so true here, As people we are dependent on knowing that we are valued, that someone is there and cares.It is the nicer consequense of being alive and part of someones elses life. ---Poetrydad--- Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Kellie Marie on August 12, 2008 04:22:15 PM	Report
	I Love It!!! This poem...is amazing!!! =) My Fav!!! Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Lubaina on March 9, 2008 04:47:36 AM	Report
	Words alone cannot express the emotions and the passion that is described in this poem.Your heart glows like the stars in the night and you heart beats like the ocean waves comforting yet so calming and real. You my poetic friend have a heart of gold and that is the greatest treasure you can ever give to someone else Because it is unconditional. This poem is beyond beautiful .Keep writing my poetic friend, because you are so gifted and talented beyond the words that you write. You have been so blessed deep within the very core of your soul.Thank you for being you and more then anything thank you for sharing this poem with all of us. Lubs. Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Leonard Wilson on December 30, 2007 12:57:55 AM	Report
	Planets tend their children, Alive on borrowed time. Ain't it the truth..The status quo is an artifical delusion, at best. Forever changing. There's no beginning. This planet will someday lose it's electro magnetic engine and die..Then the sun will go red giant and boil off the waters and earth atmosphere.. It is all a fleeting reality for the whole human race. We gotta live in the moment and be happy, knowing that tragedy is in the wings. There was never a happy ending to a life...len Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Barbara Demasson on July 28, 2007 01:44:03 AM	Report
	Wow Richard, I see more wisdom in this poem than I thought possible to capture. Bravo! ~Barbara~ Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: S on June 7, 2007 01:35:33 PM	Report
	great poem richard Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Alison Storm Wolf on May 19, 2007 05:06:57 PM	Report
	Full of emotion yes and the uncertainy of life.. Ali x Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: The Mystic Poet on May 17, 2007 11:52:56 PM	Report
	Who says you can't spin words? I have a pitchfork waiting for them if I ever find any...(good thing they dont exist!). Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Rin Marie on May 15, 2007 08:41:55 AM	Report
	Great Imagery, Nice Job Rich. This is very sweet and romantic, it reminds me of something from a good romance novel for some reason. Love, Rin Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Leroy Taylor Lyon on May 14, 2007 01:15:34 AM	Report
	awe inspiring if put to thought Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Helen on May 12, 2007 06:19:10 PM	Report
	Random moments that never again will be... Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Glata on April 27, 2007 01:52:00 PM	Report
	A beautiful write that makes me stop to think about all the choices we make each day...It's amazing how much truly does depend on us as individuals... Fantastic work, Rich! Hugs... Glata Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Joe McNinney on April 17, 2007 01:43:20 PM	Report
	*Very romantic write Rich, nicely done, Joe* Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Lady Dragonwyck on April 17, 2007 10:57:54 AM	Report
	Rich: very soft and romantic. Love it... Lady D Respond To This Comment