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Author Name: FreeFireHam 5 Comments
Date Added: April 08, 2007 13:04:08 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Branded

Branded

 

The mark has been cast. The iron was heated with red hot flame

The branding iron has permanently etched upon his heart, her name.

The wound, cauterized instantly upon coming into contact.

There was no need for any verbal or written contract.

 

Just knowing he was hers sated his soul.

The burning in fact has made him whole.

Once he roamed free and was owned by none.

But within his being, passion burned as the sun.

 

Then one day he saw her radiant beauty.

Wanting her for his own, he felt it was his duty.

Yet he was the property that would receive her brand

And her every wish became his exquisite command.

 

04/08/2007

Author's Notes:

It burns yet feels so good...

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Comments:
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on September 27, 2007 03:26:34 PM Report
OH that old  heat done seared its measure on the heart.   Nicely done. ~Pamela
Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on April 11, 2007 07:28:45 PM Report
A man that wants to please!!! Where, where!!! LOL

This is great dear. Keep em' coming.

~Penny~

Comment By: FreeGlata on April 9, 2007 11:03:08 AM Report
Quite interesting indeed~! Loved Lady D's comment, lol! Sounds like you have fired up the interest of us gals now, hehe...Most of us have encountered men in our lives that expect US to jump to THEIR every command...so it's refreshing to find a write that expresses a man's desire to be the one determined to please.

Great write, very warm content!

Hugs...

Glata

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 9, 2007 08:26:42 AM Report
Ham,

 Wow.. I found this outstanding poem this morning..
What a outstanding picture you have painted...  Branded ...is burn that last long after the cauterized is applied... Interesting speak... very creative to say the lease.. I so enjoyed this..a perment tatto to the heart .. I do enjoy your poetry my friend..Another one of my favorites...(( Smiles
 Off to work....now .
 Hugs ~She Whispers

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on April 8, 2007 08:07:09 PM Report

Ham: LOVED the last line.....such an interesting idea..........


Lady D


 






 


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