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Author Name: FreeFLETCH 8 Comments
Date Added: March 30, 2007 12:03:22 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Feeling pain that wont go away
 
 
 
Things are never what they seem

It is illusions that we see

Can't explain the reasons why

There are many faces of you and I

It seems overwhelming

Living with this pain inside

We make a pact to ignore it

Hoping to just get by

Is there something you recommend

We get sick from trying to pretend

It's the same old pain in the end

We have lost our trust again

Now we realize thats the way things are

If we bleed there is going to be a scar

So we take it to the grave

Feeling pain that wont go away
 

 

 
 
Author's Notes:
Midi from mididb 
Feelings by Morris Albert
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Comment By: FreeRin Marie on April 26, 2007 05:43:13 PM Report
This sounds so hopeless, its like agreeing to give up living happy for the rest of your life.  Just because something is painful to deal with doesn't mean you should just learn to live with it. I hope you find peace somehow, just don't quit looking.  Remarkable poem.

 

Love, Rin

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 31, 2007 08:40:45 AM Report
Fletch
Feelings of emotions that express
feelings of pain that always undress

We bleed and we scream
we love and lose the dream

Life is a learning widom
 life can be pain but though it all we still remain 
 HUgs and LOve ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on March 31, 2007 04:38:45 AM Report
It never does anyone any good to bury feelings or to pretend they don't exist, they will always out in the end, and once trust is lost it is rarely regained or at a price to high. excellent write.
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on March 31, 2007 02:19:17 AM Report
No, don't cover anything up, it will always surface so agree to deal with it. Nothing changes simply because we hope it will, we must recognize the problem and own our responsiblility in it...only then can we take steps to change our behavior. Don't accept that this is just how things are...NO...you have a choice to stay unhappy or realize this isn't working and start communicating. This is very heartfelt...full of  pain. *hugz to you* 

 

~Barbara~ 

Comment By: FreeAngel on March 30, 2007 01:59:35 PM Report
Seems life has a way of throwing things more and more at you when you feel at your lowest point. Pain that has scarred the heart never leaves us. It just imprints another hole making a pattern that never heals. I love this one Fletch very deep and emotional words that come from a heart that should never have been hurt.Huggles

 

Incredible superior write

 

Love Angelxx

 

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on March 30, 2007 01:18:53 PM Report
Once again you have touched deep. I love this

song, I always have. These words flow so perfect

with this song. your words always reach deep inside

and caress ones heart. Wonderful write!

I feel ya on this one dear!

~Penny~

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on March 30, 2007 12:50:43 PM Report
I agree with Glata Fletch, nice job! Joe
Comment By: FreeGlata on March 30, 2007 12:48:34 PM Report
The music, as much as the write, made me feel the melancholy "Feelings" that might have inspired this write. Great job, my dear friend!

Hugs...

Glata





 


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