| Comment By: Rin Marie on April 26, 2007 05:43:13 PM
This sounds so hopeless, its like agreeing to give up living happy for the rest of your life. Just because something is painful to deal with doesn't mean you should just learn to live with it. I hope you find peace somehow, just don't quit looking. Remarkable poem.
| Comment By: She Whispers on March 31, 2007 08:40:45 AM
Feelings of emotions that express
feelings of pain that always undress
We bleed and we scream
we love and lose the dream
Life is a learning widom
life can be pain but though it all we still remain
HUgs and LOve ~ She Whispers
| Comment By: Graham Jones on March 31, 2007 04:38:45 AM
|It never does anyone any good to bury feelings or to pretend they don't exist, they will always out in the end, and once trust is lost it is rarely regained or at a price to high. excellent write.|
| Comment By: Barbara Demasson on March 31, 2007 02:19:17 AM
No, don't cover anything up, it will always surface so agree to deal with it. Nothing changes simply because we hope it will, we must recognize the problem and own our responsiblility in it...only then can we take steps to change our behavior. Don't accept that this is just how things are...NO...you have a choice to stay unhappy or realize this isn't working and start communicating. This is very heartfelt...full of pain. *hugz to you*
| Comment By: Angel on March 30, 2007 01:59:35 PM
Seems life has a way of throwing things more and more at you when you feel at your lowest point. Pain that has scarred the heart never leaves us. It just imprints another hole making a pattern that never heals. I love this one Fletch very deep and emotional words that come from a heart that should never have been hurt.Huggles
Incredible superior write
| Comment By: VizualEnsemble on March 30, 2007 01:18:53 PM
Once again you have touched deep. I love this
song, I always have. These words flow so perfect
with this song. your words always reach deep inside
and caress ones heart. Wonderful write!
I feel ya on this one dear!
| Comment By: Joe McNinney on March 30, 2007 12:50:43 PM
|I agree with Glata Fletch, nice job! Joe|
| Comment By: Glata on March 30, 2007 12:48:34 PM
The music, as much as the write, made me feel the melancholy "Feelings" that might have inspired this write. Great job, my dear friend!