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Author Name: Freejohncarter 5 Comments
Date Added: February 03, 2007 02:02:37 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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One Night

One Night



 



Let my heart be still



In your warm caress



Take away the sorrow



That tomorrow



Will bring unless



You stay.



I would not ask



For one more day



Just the promise



That you will stay.



It may be just a token



But your eyes to me



Have spoken



They whispered softly



To my heart and told me



We should start



This conversation



In the morning.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLynn Cowman on September 2, 2007 05:34:30 AM Report
Beautiful and Delicate, I like the ease of this poem

 

Lyn.

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on February 5, 2007 06:06:27 AM Report
The best poem I've read in  awhile..The insecurities of an intimate relationship comes across so strongly. The delicacy of the wording, almost tentative. This is from the heart and it showss..I love this inspired, I say INSPIRED poeteic work of art..len
Comment By: FreeAdri on February 4, 2007 06:37:48 AM Report
That is what I love about your poetry.  It is to the point.  Sweet request, who can not embrace it! Lovely.
Love
Adri x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 3, 2007 10:52:40 AM Report
John,
 ahhhh .. such a sweet request to make to the one who whispers to your gentle heart... Your Angel will find your heart when it is time..Good things come to thoses who wait..
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on February 3, 2007 03:51:01 AM Report
Very nicely done John, short and sweet and to the point.




 


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