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Author Name: FreeSilkintears 13 Comments
Date Added: January 10, 2007 12:01:48 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Forgiveness
If I could turn back the time I would.
If we had another chance.
If we can heal the wounds we should,
If only for one dance.
 
If I could understand your pain.
If you could understand mine.
If only time could heal those wounds
we no longer would be in the rain.
 
If only we remember the good.
If only we can forget the bad.
Then we could reach out and connect our hands
and never again feel sad.
 
If the world would stop today
Would we have regret.
Would we look up to God and say
One more day not yet.
 
So why not put the past behind
and try again one more time.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSteve on February 15, 2008 02:20:04 PM Report
Forgivness says someting about the person giving it too .......nice write....I like it. I wrote a poem about forgiveness also....great minds.....
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 20, 2007 03:30:20 PM Report
Helen,
It says your box is full...did you get my last  reply??

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 20, 2007 01:52:52 PM Report
Helen,

 Powerful poem I must say it speaks volumns to the reader.. your talent is wonderful.... to forgive is such a hard thing to do....How well I understand this poem..
Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeLexi on January 19, 2007 03:25:34 PM Report
I totally agree to what your whole poem was about!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Today I just I had my writing prompt at school!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was scary first but then I aced it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great poem once again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Keeping ya in my prayers!!!!!!!!!!

-Sweet prayers Lexi

Comment By: FreeKaren Marrah on January 17, 2007 08:41:39 PM Report
Forgiveness for some comes easy, and for others proves difficult. If only it came easy for everyone would our world be with less pain...I especially loved this verse....Thank you Helen for sharing this wonderful write with me.....

"If only we remember the good.

If only we can forget the bad.

Then we could reach out and connect our hands

and never again feel sad."

 

Karen

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on January 13, 2007 11:20:57 PM Report
It is good to remember past mistakes, they are life lessons every bit as much as the good things we have lived through. Forgiveness isn't difficult if one feels the offender is genuine in his/her regret. Trying one more time...well that might take more than forgiveness, it might take some BIG adjustments and compromise. Forgiveness is possible and helps heal if both parties are on the same page.  

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeRandy Harrison on January 13, 2007 12:14:59 PM Report
To forgive is divine. Well written.

Randy

Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on January 12, 2007 07:21:28 PM Report
Wouldn't it be nice if everyone could do this? You have penned this thought provoking write so very well Helen..Hugz...Jillian
Comment By: FreeSamuel E. Stone on January 12, 2007 06:47:44 PM Report
Very nice poem, filled with a lot of truth... I enjoyed the read...\

Wishing you well...

Sam

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on January 11, 2007 11:28:26 AM Report
To just forgive and forget sounds so simple to do, but often is so difficult to accomplish. I think it's because feelings and foolish pride get in the way. Honest and well written Helen.  Henry
Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on January 10, 2007 02:06:41 PM Report
To put the past behind and forgive...sometimes the hardest thing to ever do.

I know from experience, still I have some forgiving to do, I know it is the

right thing to do, but for me the hardest. Great write Lady. You have a gentle

way with words.

~Penny~

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on January 10, 2007 01:08:56 PM Report
To forgive... something so simple yet so hard to complete.

Blessings to you! ~ LTK

Comment By: FreeJourney on January 10, 2007 01:04:12 PM Report
Wow Helen this is fantastic, put the past behind and try one more time.  Excellent my dear friend

 

Hugs ~ Journey





 


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