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Author Name: FreeSilkintears 11 Comments
Date Added: January 08, 2007 17:01:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Letting Go
You give them birth.
You give them life.
You tuck them in and kiss them goodnight.
Your dreams are big.
Your wishes are small,
just be happy, that's all
 
You think you can protect them from life's horrors.
You love them so much.
You watch them grow.
You have trouble letting go.
 
And now they've grown
Everything you feared came true.
You thought you'd die.
You couldn't breathe.
A part of you died as you grieve
The loss of your sons.
The precious gift God gave he took away.
You gave them everything you had
and as you grieve you wish you had
Loved them more.
 
The decisions they made,
The path they chose,
You had no control
Your only choice
Let go.
Author's Notes:

My deep pain of losing my boys to a lifestyle I never thought they'd tread. Don't know which is a better title  "Letting Go" or "Let them Fall"?

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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 24, 2009 12:30:02 AM Report
Letting go IS a demonstration of love...better to let them fall than to enable them. I have an awesome verse about letting go that I had to read many times while learning how to let go...if you would like I will be happy to send it to you. The last stanza is rich with information and something every mother must learn in her own time. Simply said and very heartfelt piece Helen.

 

~Barbara~ 

Comment By: Freeleahlopez on January 20, 2007 01:27:10 PM Report
Helen,

I think you choose the title correctly, "letting them go"

I don't have children so it's truly hard for me to fully understand the emotions you must feel. However, this is a really moving poem and a gripping write.

Hugs Helen.

 

LOPEZ X

 

Comment By: FreeLexi on January 19, 2007 03:34:46 PM Report
Wow, you write such great poems!!!!!!

This one is one of your best!!!!!!

You did great once again.................

And I'm looking foward to hear more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Keeping you in my prayers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-Sweet prayers Lexi

Comment By: FreeRandy Harrison on January 13, 2007 12:42:23 PM Report
I feel the pain of this piece. But remember, if you love someone let them go and if they return to you, they truly love you as well. I know it's hard to love the individual regardless of their activities or lifestyle but, it helps tremendously.

Best wishes,

Randy

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on January 10, 2007 04:07:05 PM Report
Such emotion from what you have written, my heart goes out to you for your loss...

Comment By: FreeKevin Dutton on January 10, 2007 10:11:37 AM Report
This is so deep, Helen.  Beautiful words to express such a difficult subject.  Done wonderfully.

 

Kevin x

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on January 9, 2007 02:40:37 PM Report
I feel your heartbreak Helen, you do all you can, teach them right from wrong, but once they leave your door it all comes down to how they handle peer pressure. All you can do is hope they make good decisions. I hope all goes well for you Helen.   Henry
Comment By: FreeGlata on January 9, 2007 11:18:20 AM Report
Which ever title you use, I can feel your pain in every line and clear to the depths of my soul, as I'm going through some of the same stuff with my own son.  If you ever need a listening ear...holler, and I'll give you a phone number.

Sending heartfelt hugs and deep understanding of whre you're coming from...

Glata

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on January 9, 2007 04:14:22 AM Report
Letting go is so very hard whatever the reason, but especially when it is beyond your control, the hurt and pain are none the less, as parents we are only a guide and the final choice as to their path is theirs be it right or wrong, time is the healer and may it lay kindly for you.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 8, 2007 09:27:30 PM Report
Helen, As I read this I can feel what your saying..as Mothers we only can do so much..hoping we  have done a good enough job to see them through... I have 4 children so I can relate to this poem so well... HUgs ~ She Whispers
Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on January 8, 2007 08:18:28 PM Report
My heart is out to you dear lady......I know this all too well.....My youngest daughter is 18 and has turned to a life of no good.......Ya try to raise them with morals and values and knowing right from wrong, you love then dearly, more than life itself, you show that love daily, you go through anything for them, you just want them to be happy, have a great life and be caring and responsible adults when they grow up....and we as mothers wonder "where did we go wrong."......It was as though a big part of me died when I had to just let go, let her be, and sad to say, let her fall......I went through so very much pain trying to get her to do right to no avail.....finally the law says "Penny, just let her go."......I cried for days, I still do....I miss her..I worry all the time, but what else do we mothers know to do.......I just pray that I don't lose her to death....although it hurts as much....My prayers are with you and any parent going through this. God bless you dear.

Love & Hugs,

~Penny~





 


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