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Author Name: FreeSilkintears 13 Comments
Date Added: December 31, 2006 17:12:59 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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PRISON WALLS
The walls you've built protect you from me,
the one you've chosen not to see.
The glasses you wear to see the world
are dark and clouded, I'm sure you've been told
yet you put them on, afraid of what you might see,
the real me.
 
The coldness you share with the people you meet
protect you from their warm heat.
You shiver alone in the darkest corners of earth.
The warmth you seek was within you at birth
but your trapped in a mind of dillusions and guilt
locked in your prison with walls that you built.
 
Just take off your glasses, look through your blue eyes.
The sunshine and brightness will be a surprise,
and you'll stare at that corner in which you sat
wondering why it's not cold anymore.
The warmth of your body now radiates heat
and now you are warming the people you meet.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSteve on April 4, 2008 08:59:47 AM Report

The words just kind of stomp across the page with feelings.....awsome write.


Comment By: FreeGlata on May 26, 2007 11:04:08 AM Report
I hope he will heed this...I know that it comes from the loving heart of one that cares more than life for him.

Hugs and smiles to you...

Glata

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on January 26, 2007 11:43:36 PM Report
Very moving and emotional piece of writng, nicely done, Joe
Comment By: FreeAndy on January 20, 2007 04:08:35 PM Report
Very well done!
Comment By: FreeAngel on January 18, 2007 04:57:34 AM Report
Wonderful so touching

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on January 12, 2007 07:24:00 PM Report
Bravo Helen. This is a beautiful, though haunting write. I wanted to tell you also that your' IM box is full. Keep up the good work...Hugz...Jillian
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on January 9, 2007 12:23:22 PM Report
It is a fact that we live in the world that we create and that the world is as we see it.

Good thoughts generate good happenings.

 

Nice one Helen

 

Ali x

Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on January 5, 2007 10:42:19 AM Report
Such a sad write. Deeply stirs the heart dear. Excellent piece.

Love & Hugs to ya,

~Penny~

Comment By: Freeleahlopez on January 2, 2007 10:45:25 AM Report
sad write helen,

 

LOPEZ X

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on January 1, 2007 06:04:19 PM Report
We try to protect ourselves with walls...but they really hinder us more than help us. Fine thoughts here Helen...so true!

 

~B~

Comment By: FreeRichard Michael Cronin on January 1, 2007 12:12:29 PM Report
Good write Helen! You can't hide from life.
Comment By: Freeleroy taylor fiddler lyon on January 1, 2007 02:06:14 AM Report
really good

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 31, 2006 07:07:25 PM Report
Helen, Wow.. now this tells the story .. we sometimes have to take off our glasses to really see.. Wonderful poem.."Happy New Year"" Hugs ~She Whispers




 


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