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Author Name: FreeBlueyd553 7 Comments
Date Added: December 26, 2006 03:12:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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So Much Under My Skin~Cowrite with Michael A. Meddings
So Much Under My Skin
 
 

In my haunted dreams you always remained
A beautiful; enchanting; delightful memory
So much under my skin, I worshiped your name

Days I counted with your voice resounding
And in my ears your sweet note softly lingered
In my haunted dreams you always remained
 
And even though we parted so desperately
Your memory enriched my days for you were
So much under my skin , I worshiped your name
 
Every living moment my mind would wander
Hapless in endless pursuit of my need for you
In my haunted dreams you always remained
 
For then in the dawning of my realized love
I came and offered my heart completely to you
So much under my skin, I worshiped your name
 
And bathed in the fragrant essence of your being
You, like a sacred incense permeate my very soul
In my haunted dreams you always remained
So much under my skin, I worshiped your
name
 
 
Author's Notes:
Thank you Michael for this cowrite and introducing me to the Villanelle.
 
Acknowledgements to Wild Rose Sigs
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on August 15, 2008 12:08:43 AM Report
Very good poem from the two of you Cindy.  I knew already that both of you were great poets.  I am glad that I got a chance to read it at last.
Damon

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on June 3, 2008 11:18:35 AM Report
You know Cindy, I don't know how I missed this jewel before today.  With Michael's passing this really takes on a deminsion of it's own and I'm sure you will treasure this write even more so.

 

 

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on January 9, 2007 01:24:40 AM Report
I loved the "so much under my skin" repetition. beautiful co-write you two.

 

Helen

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 5, 2007 10:32:08 PM Report
Cindy,
Once again you have written with such passion...  You two blend like swirling paint on a canvas .. just beautiful pretty lady... I really enjoy your poetry.. Thank you for your sweet comments.. Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: Freeleahlopez on December 29, 2006 01:32:17 PM Report
Splendid co-write, well penned!

 

LOPEZ X

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on December 26, 2006 11:34:19 AM Report
Very beautiful words once again Cindy and Michael, your combined talents are a treat for all of us and you both blend well together.    Henry
Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on December 26, 2006 03:58:26 AM Report
Cindy this a beautiful Villanelle - It is so difficult to write vllanelle, but so rearding when you get it right as you have here. At first  I thought - O there's too much repetition here, then I recognised the villanelle form - wonderful.

 

Warm Wishes

 

David





 


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