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Author Name: Freebateluer 9 Comments
Date Added: December 11, 2006 16:12:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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LIFE & DEATH

LIFE & DEATH

Soft cries, newborn plight
Held in arms, loves tender delight
Seeking comfort from breast of love
New life held in arms, a warm cove

WHILE

Gunshots peal against ink black sky
Wounded dying wait and cry
Odour of death permeates smoke dank air
Bodies lay in grotesque flair

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeRin Marie on April 26, 2007 05:05:06 PM Report
Sad, but somewhat uplifting.  The idea of a peaceful loving start compaired to a violent ugly death is powerful, nice topic.  Great write.

 

Love, Rin

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on December 14, 2006 01:15:08 AM Report
Sad and true...within life there is also death. very emotional write Joe.

 

Helen

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on December 13, 2006 06:54:38 PM Report
What a stark contrast, Joe..Nicely penned.. Someday, we may evolve to the point where children are not born to grow up and die in wars..I'm having a little faith in a Star Trek future for our race. After all, we haven't been out of the tree tops that long...len
Comment By: Freeleahlopez on December 13, 2006 06:43:48 AM Report
This poem will have gripped many hearts, The image of the poem was so clear, the babies crying.

Horible world, which will never be rested, sadly.

Hugs"

 

LOPEZ X

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 11, 2006 09:59:01 PM Report
Joe,

 A poem that exist  and breaths in the sounds  of your native world... A sad poem but you see hear and read every day.. I'm sorry for your losses in your country...
A constant battle that no one wins....Hugs ~ Scarlett

Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on December 11, 2006 08:35:00 PM Report
Dear Joe-
Two simple yet complex words-
The only reality of this existence that is a fact is
life begets death-
A excellent and decisive description in a
short yet in depth piece of writing-
Best Wishes~
Peace~
James

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on December 11, 2006 07:53:24 PM Report
What a chillingly poignant contrast you present us here, Joe...

I could hear the babies cry and smell the guns bitter...smell...what's that called?

This really plays tug~of~war with both heart and mind.

Excellent penning of a poignant experience~

Hugs,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on December 11, 2006 07:05:55 PM Report
Joe:  Very emotional write --- such saddness.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeAngel on December 11, 2006 05:07:13 PM Report
Puts life into reality and makes one open their eyes to what is happening outside our world.

God help them in their world Joe

 

Excellent write dear friend

 

Love Angelxx





 


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