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Author Name: Freeleahlopez 5 Comments
Date Added: December 06, 2006 14:12:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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We stand co-write with Joe

                

We stand, unable to move

Yet alive to feel, emotions

And the rain, in which it falls

Yet we are oblivious

Transfixed within, each others eyes

 

You melt my heart

With the taste of your lips

You slide you hands, lower

Holding on to my hips

 

Stood in the heart

Of life,

Just you and I

 

Your eyes are spellbinding
Within their depths, I am lost
Forever
The warmth of your body so close
Intoxicates me

As your arms, lace around my neck
They are a bond in which I feel safe
Your kisses are liquid fire, burning
Upon my lips

The world around us invisible
We are life

 

Your eyes will be

The first thing I see

And forever more

Our love will shine

Just like the scene

Of a sunrise

So beautiful

And so calm

 

I love you, with all my heart

As you love me, with all you have

 

Author's Notes:
This is a co-write with the lovely Joe, I thank you so much for working with me to co-write this poem
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAdri on December 13, 2006 04:32:27 AM Report
Oh Leah so beautiful, and full of energy and passion and love.  You two make a great team!  Hope to see more of these.
Adri x

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on December 7, 2006 01:29:06 AM Report

ooooooh what a passionate exchange..you two are burning up the screen. Way to go, I loved the energy within this poem. =))


~Barbara~


Comment By: FreeAngel on December 6, 2006 03:43:31 PM Report
Beautiful words that blend together so wonderful

 

Excellent

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on December 6, 2006 02:59:21 PM Report
Very intense passion you two, wonderfully done!

LTK

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on December 6, 2006 02:58:13 PM Report
what abeautiful co-write Joe and Leah

Helen





 


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