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Author Name: Freefanofjims 5 Comments
Date Added: December 04, 2006 08:12:04 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Ask Yourself Why~9

Ask Yourself Why


11/07/06


 


Mornings sunrise is yesterdays farewell


The universe keeps the earth in parallel


Generations have passed lost and unguided


So the truth to creation remains undecided


 


Measure the distance between here and there


Strip down existence and then view it bare


The phoenix lies dormant until itís risen


Awakened by mans incoherent decisions


 


So walk across sands of ancient pharaohs


As the passage of time quickly narrows


Witness the ending become the beginning


The chambers loaded and stopped spinning


 


While you walk ahead do you look behind


And explore the long hallways of your mind


Do you learn from reflections of your past


That can rewind forward incredibly fast


 


Clocks stand still when the future descends


Time is our enemy yet is destinies friend


So consume the horizon and examine the sky


Digest all the questions and ask yourself why

Author's Notes:
This piece is from some of the poems collected so far to
be placed into the pages of what will become my 9th book-
There is so much I could say about this one but I think I'm
more curious to see what thoughts this brings to you-
A little side note that I want to add here is to any of you
who have thought about publishing your work but aren't
sure how to do it- 
A little less than 2 years ago I didn't either-
Today I am working on publishing my 8th and writing my 9th-
Follow your dreams people and someday they will come true-
Peace~
James

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel on April 23, 2008 03:50:27 PM Report
Pause for thought James. Makes one question many things.A wonderful write
Comment By: FreeJeff on December 6, 2006 09:33:37 AM Report
Once again, an amazing look on life...

You truly are an inspired writer.

 

Jeff

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on December 5, 2006 07:56:28 PM Report
To be able to ask the question, it's helpful if you can understand the answer. I suspect the why is so monumentally simple that we will never understand it...Great think peice, James..getting published is no trick these days..Getting anyone to read what you publish is another matter entirely..When is the last time you saw a book of poetry on someone's bookshelf?...len
Comment By: FreeJourney on December 4, 2006 09:45:04 AM Report
James,

I am a big fan of yours,  this piece is amazing.

 

~Journey~

Comment By: FreeMISS_VEE on December 4, 2006 09:16:17 AM Report
wow. this one sure rocks James.

going on a one way trip 2 my faves

*clap clap*

 

lv Vee x





 


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