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Author Name: FreeSilkintears 17 Comments
Date Added: November 30, 2006 17:11:33 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Twinkling light
I woke up this morning it was Cristmas day
A cup of hot cocoa a slice of white bread
We stood by the table hands folded to pray
giving our blessings nothing more said
 
Seven children was more than a family could bear
money was tight there was nothing to spare
A Christmas tree was nowhere to be seen
No presents, no gifts, only a dream
 
A dress that was sewn by my mother's bare hands
A brand new pair of shoes to replace the old ones
This was the tradition we had in our home
A new dress and shoes to replace what was torn
 
The sunshine is bright
There's no snow on the ground
The weather is hot
There's flies all around
 
And as I walked to church that day
I thought of the candy the church gave away
to every little girl and boy
this was how my Christmas was filled with joy
 
And some postcards at church I did see
Santa clause next to a Christmas tree
Presents so beautiful wrapped in gold
Snow on the treetops it must be cold
 
I had never known Christmas that way
I never saw snow in which I could play
And the weather is hot, there's no air in the room
and the postcard has no flowers in bloom
 
And as I drifted deep in my head
I started to dream of what would be said
to all of my friends who would tell me their day
of presents and bright lights of Christmas their way
 
I'd tell them of presents that I did recieve
wrapped in gold under my tree
And how it was covered with one great big light.
And how it did twinkle and sparkle all night
 
And as I would tell them I know I'd believe
that the Christmas I dreamt was the one I recieved
So cherish those moments of Christmas each day
for not every child has Christmas that way
 
 
Author's Notes:
I grew up in Australia the rest is self explanatory
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSteve on April 21, 2008 02:26:44 PM Report
A beautiful poem. Very deserving of an award.
Comment By: FreeMark S. Valence on July 19, 2007 01:24:48 PM Report
Beautiful write!
Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on February 17, 2007 01:23:28 AM Report
This is a beautiful wonderful discriptive write, so desrving of the award. excellent.
Comment By: FreeRoger on February 4, 2007 12:56:28 AM Report
I always know when a poem is deserving of such an award... when I get goosebumps during and after reading it.  Congratulations.  The sadness is evident, although joy shines through.  Very well written.
Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on January 30, 2007 11:25:38 AM Report
So very deeply moving and well worthy of award!
Comment By: FreeAngel on January 30, 2007 04:55:30 AM Report
Congrats on the award most deserving. Love costs nothing you have painted a beautiful image of the church you went to. Family love is more important than any present. Much love

 

Beautiufl write

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeGoliath Assassin on January 15, 2007 11:53:13 PM Report
WOW!  Yeah, this is extremely eserving of an award.  I'm putting it in my favorites.  Best of Christmas wishes for you and yours nowadays.
Comment By: FreeRandy Harrison on December 16, 2006 06:41:44 AM Report
Congratulations on the award and for penning such a nice piece. Randy
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on December 15, 2006 11:05:41 AM Report
Congrats on your muchly deserved award. *S* Whispering Winds
Comment By: FreeKaren Marrah on December 11, 2006 09:25:16 AM Report
I enjoyed this very touching write. Congrats on your featured award!

Karen

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on December 10, 2006 06:40:56 PM Report
Congratulations on your Feature Poem Award for this excellent write.

 

Lady Dragonwyck

Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on December 4, 2006 12:58:32 PM Report

WOW! Awesome dear lady. This is lovely. You sure placed your heart so beautifully


within this write. Two thumbs up !


~Penny~


Comment By: PremiumPaul on December 2, 2006 10:39:31 PM Report
How heart warming - Wonderfully done!

Paul

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 2, 2006 02:52:53 PM Report
Helen, Oh__ dear lady, I did enjoy this awesome poem.. I know all about hard times and I live in Texas... I came from a large family and growing up was not a pretty sight sometimes.. Awesome poem and I want to Welcome you to our site!!  Great friends and writers..
~ She Whispers

Comment By: Freeleahlopez on December 2, 2006 12:50:37 PM Report
Christmas is full of gifts, it's that family that surround you, and that is all you need, whatevery one needs, presents are a bonus. Your poem was quite inspirational, i love it

Keep writing,

 

LOPEZ X

Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on December 2, 2006 12:45:11 PM Report
Excellent write with superb thoughtfullness!!!
Comment By: FreeRichard Michael Cronin on December 1, 2006 06:21:43 PM Report
nicely written, keepum comin'




 


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