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Author Name: Freeramonathompson 2 Comments
Date Added: November 16, 2006 18:11:02 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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All Because You Did't Love Her
She followed her today
Tracked her down to that apartment downtown
Watched her and made plans
Pointed the gun and took aim
One shot
That was all it took
Now as the other woman lays there bleeding on the floor
Dying
She wants you to know
That it's all your fault
You had a choice
She gave you time
And you choose wrong
Her over what should have been your true love
That was your last mistake
Cos now she's dead and so is the future you had planned together
All because you did't love her


So many times
She cried so many tears
Begging you over and over and over again
She called
She faxed
She e-mailed
But you always ignored her
Until the moment came when you pushed her too far
She decided enough was enough and took matters into her own hands
What you loved
Her hate destoryed
She blames that on you
She blames everything wrong in her life on you
All because you did't love her


Sad isn't it?
That you had to end like this
She's gonna call
Gonna tell you about the crime she just committed
Then she will wait for you
With the barrel of a gun aimed and pointed
2 bullets left
1 for you and 1 for her
Soon her hated beloved will be gone
Then you will be together forever
Just you and her in Heaven
Your other lover burning like the whore she was in hell
Put there by jealousy's weapon of choice
All because you did't love her


The time has come at last
She hears your footsteps outside the door
With her joy building she smiles
Rising the gun and firing as you come racing through the door
Your cry of shock and horror drowned out by the blast
Her brains hit the wall
Eyes rolling back in her head
As she slumps dead to the floor
At last she has found her peace
Could't live without you
You would't let her live with you
So this was her only choice
The only way
Going to Heaven without you
Leaving you behind to mourn
Knowing that the loss of these 2 youngs lifes
Was all your fault
All because you did't......LOVE HER!

By RAMONA THOMPSON

2006 RAMONA THOMPSON (All rights reserved)

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAnthony on November 16, 2006 06:33:26 PM Report
So did she leave a one bullet for the person who walked in to kill himself?  Because I don't think he will.  (Or it could be a "she", I guess).

 

It's a very strong poem.  But to me it sounds less like "true love" and more like a psycho's obsession.  I think true love would forgive him for choosing the wrong woman and would let them both live so he could learn from his mistake later.  If she thought death was a good answer to her problems, I can see why he didn't love her.

Comment By: FreeTiffany on November 16, 2006 06:13:35 PM Report
well love is a strong word and 'true love omly comes once in a lifetime' seriously.

great poem

*TIFFANY*





 


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