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Author Name: Freefanofjims 9 Comments
Date Added: November 16, 2006 08:11:21 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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My Imaginary Home~3

My Imaginary Home


My mind flows like a river

Where thoughts run deep and wide

Some things I'll let you see

And some things I keep inside

It is there I've built my castle

It's where I find some peace

And I'll never have to leave

Because I signed a lifetime lease

So I sit and watch the world

Within my sanctuary

It's where I run for cover

When reality gets scary

I have used it for my shelter

From the never ending rain

It is there that I'm protected

From this place of hurt and pain

So if ever you can't find me

On paths where we may roam

Feel free to knock upon the door

Of my imaginary home

Author's Notes:
This poem is from the pages of my 3rd book and is
going to be included in my upcoming 10th book---
Reflections-2 The Very Best of The Journey
The thing I always liked about this one is I was trying
to describe where it is my creative forces from within
are developed and processed-
But I think it also describes very well a place where
we all need to go sometimes when the world becomes
a little too harsh to deal with-
Peace~
James
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel on April 23, 2008 03:53:44 PM Report
You are a fantastic writer and have written the words I have been searching for but could never find James. Loved it

 

Magnificent

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on November 18, 2006 06:14:31 PM Report
Nicely penned, James..Flows like a river, if you'll excuse the obvious reference.. I too, have a place inside me where no-one is welcome. I think we all do..Some need it more than others. I consider myself honest, but not completely open, even to those closest to me. Right or wrong, it's who I am..Good job, buddy..len
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on November 18, 2006 04:56:25 PM Report
This has just become an instant fav James, I love this write, Joe
Comment By: FreeJeff on November 17, 2006 01:45:14 PM Report
So clever....

I've always found a welcome sign at the front door of your Imaginary Home.

 

Jeff

Comment By: FreeTE intl on November 17, 2006 05:20:04 AM Report
ay dad as you know im sick as hell right now i cant record but i wanted to turn this into a song when i read it

Comment By: Freeryan on November 16, 2006 06:45:12 PM Report
great write keep it up
Comment By: FreeJourney on November 16, 2006 11:07:27 AM Report
Excellent write

 

Journey

Comment By: FreeGlata on November 16, 2006 09:53:24 AM Report
I'll be there in about 10 minutes! A shelter from life's storms? I could SURE use that! Prepare that spare room, brother mine...I'm coming for a visit!

This is a fantastic piece of writing, James...and I could see that Castle in my mind. I think that we all have one of those retreats...and if we don't have, we end up either losing our minds or creating that place where we can escape to.

Great poem!

Hugs and love

Your NC Sis...Glata

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on November 16, 2006 08:57:16 AM Report
Great work James, a pleasure to read poems such as this.




 


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