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Author Name: Freebluefish 6 Comments
Date Added: November 11, 2006 22:11:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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No Path Desired
Children in flowers play
the moon rolls over the branches
of the sky
and holds splotches of moonlight
in the subtlety of petals
for time runs backward.
when the heart is sufficient
to let the moon
turn over the roof of our life.
With no path desired.
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Comment By: FreeWide Awake on November 14, 2006 08:09:50 AM Report
hm...and why is this?

Why the serenity which one feels by simply letting the moon roll over their roofs...?

...time seems to lose its importance when we are simply accepting our lot and following the path before us....which is good...for time is an ingenuity of man...and it probably causes more damage(stress) than good.

Man is really gifted at complicating his existance, not so? :o)

Loved the metaphor in this...

JUST got the implications of time moving backwards now :o)

Great~

Pamela

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on November 14, 2006 03:28:29 AM Report
~Andrew
Serene wording that I truly like...very lovely, thank you!
(*Moon~

Comment By: FreeFire Fox on November 12, 2006 09:17:43 PM Report

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on November 12, 2006 06:39:24 PM Report
It is the way of the sages...

Wonderful penning oh wise one! ;o)
Enjoyed~

Wee little fox :o)

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 12, 2006 09:50:11 AM Report
Andrew, your way with words placed so perfect just thrill my eyes...hugs ~ She Whispers
Comment By: TrialAnn on November 12, 2006 09:13:32 AM Report
Lovely work. Excellent word choices.





 


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