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Author Name: Freeleahlopez 4 Comments
Date Added: November 11, 2006 13:11:08 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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When we were gypsies

 

Donít stop when the music stops

Even when the fever drops

The castanets have ceased to play

The romance in your eyes I see

Could I take you away with me?

 

Iíll take you through the rain

Where the light, remains

The only rhythm of day

Where the sound of the patter

Which really doesnít matter

Itís insane that the rain

Could make me feel this way

 

 

Author's Notes:
Co-write with JohnCarter.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJoe on December 26, 2006 02:52:50 PM Report
Fabulous co-write, such wonderful warmth and feel to it..Joe
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on November 25, 2006 08:15:24 AM Report

Donít stop when the music stops


Even when the fever drops


The castanets have ceased to play

 

Priceless wisdom

 

Ali x

Comment By: FreeAdri on November 17, 2006 04:24:59 AM Report
I love the way you took the subject over to the next poem!!  You are so at home here...  I am with John...  MORE!!! 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 11, 2006 02:28:28 PM Report
You two have written such a very passionate love poem.. it speaks of such passion.. very beautiful indeed.. Hugs to you bothe ~ She Whispers




 


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