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Author Name: Adminrich53 8 Comments
Date Added: November 11, 2006 11:11:37 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Fallout
The farther I get from you,
(You passed by, I threw my hopes aside)
I wonder more and more how I'll get through.
 
The more removed I am from your grace,
(Memories linger of you, yet life began anew)
I'm less sure I can stand this place.
 
As I become someone other than you know,
(I feel you down deep, where my heart now sleeps)
Doubt grows that I'll ever feel whole.
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Comment By: Freemaggie lopez sherry wilbur on October 24, 2010 10:10:21 PM Report
I am so feeling these words these days. It is as you looked into my life and soul and these words were put in the right way. Always Maggie.
Comment By: FreeGlata on January 26, 2007 09:01:36 AM Report
I think this is something that we can all relate to in some form or another...and I can feel the extreme depths of emotion that was poured into this. You've a beautiful heart and soul, Rich...and it shows up clearly here. May you find the peace and love that will once again make you feel whole.

Hugs my friend...

Glata

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 4, 2007 08:04:27 PM Report
"I feel you down deep, where my heart now sleeps"

I like that line, Richard..The longing and depression is crystal clear in this little ditty...yer pal, len

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on November 17, 2006 10:15:24 PM Report
Very creative with the parenthesis Rich, they add to the poem. Nicely done Sir, Joe
Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on November 13, 2006 12:24:02 AM Report
aww, man that very sad rich. Long time hearing from you in poetry form. Glad you posted it.
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on November 11, 2006 10:12:50 PM Report
"I feel you down deep, where my heart now sleeps"...this line speaks volumes.  You express your lingering feelings for this woman in a way that leaves a portion of your pain with the reader.
I wish for your heart to wake Rich.

This is a beautiful poem...but I do feel your heartache. *hugz to you*

~Barbara~ 

 


 


Comment By: PremiumAnn on November 11, 2006 05:17:58 PM Report
This is a very quiet piece, feelings of resignation and still longing
seem to predominate. It's nice to see you posting. Keep it going, you
know we enjoy your work. Nicely done Rich.


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 11, 2006 11:36:15 AM Report
Rich, When we love this deeply are we ever whole again.. I think not!! ((
As I become someone other than you know,

(I feel you down deep, where my heart now sleeps)

Doubt grows that I'll ever feel whole.

But stranger things can happen.. new life and real hope does have wings when it is time... Perhaps you need to let go of the past to have a future!!  Hugs ~ She Whispers




 


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