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Author Name: FreeJimiMuller 1 Comments
Date Added: January 23, 2003 22:01:16 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Inner You
I can’t talk. It’s like walking in a dream. You know you’re there, but you can’t wake. It’s like screaming uncontrollably. Nobody can hear you. You’re going insane. Going blind. Can’t see. Walking see. Walking blind. Falling, falling. ‘Cuz I’m freeee, free falling. BAM! More like thud. A brief darkness. You’re dead. You can still see and hear. See and hear people. People crying, cant move. Pain, cold. Why? A thought comes to your head. One last thought. Did you do it for love? Yes. Loved too much.

It’s getting black. Black, black. They zip up the body bag. You see someone. You run. Running for hours and hours. You read a sign. It says, “Visibility forever” you can still see the person, kneeling over something. Crying. You realize that the person is someone you love. She/he, your not sure, is crying for and over you. You’re going crazy. Psychotic, again. A journey
into the mind of a psychopath killer, who loved a couple people too much. The inner you. You cant even tell its there. The inner you. Once you find it you’ll be scared. The inner you. Slow down and take your time. The inner you. BAM! Don’t let it blow your mind.
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Comment By: Freehanna on November 23, 2006 07:49:30 AM Report
wow, thats very good


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