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Author Name: Freejust a nobody 5 Comments
Date Added: October 30, 2006 20:10:53 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Razor's Voice
Silenced in the corner, entangled in lies,
until a little voice said,
 
"Hush my darling, don't you cry."
"I'm here to help, don't be alarmed. I'll bring you comfort, just give me your arms."
"I'll keep you safe, have no fear. Please stop crying, wipe those tears."
"Don't you worry, it'll be okay. I promise I'll make the pain go away."
"Trust me, little one, I won't cause you harm."
 
Then slowly, so slowly, I stretch out my arm.
 
I feel a dull throbbing and wince at the start,
bite down on my lips as my skin tears apart.
The pain goes deeper and I close my eyes shut.
Then I scream, "Stop! I've had enough."
 
I look down at my arms, a blanket of red.
Beautiful ribbons, but am I to be dead?
 
"No, you're not dead. But how do you feel?"
 
and that's when I realize, for once I feel...real.
 
"Now I'm feeling much better, thank you, my friend.
You've helped me a lot, please come again."
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAbi on October 16, 2008 04:42:00 AM Report
Ahh, I just found this again. Now I remember how I found out about everything. And it's still a great poem =]

Abi xx

 

Comment By: FreeAbi on March 14, 2008 12:33:46 PM Report
wow this is good

do you mind me asking if this is true to you?

good write =]

Abi xx

Comment By: PremiumMahala Rose on March 12, 2008 10:27:45 PM Report
Yah..I can relate so much it's scary..My blade is one of my closet friends.

Iunno what else to comment on excpet that I'm kinda speechless

Comment By: FreeJane on December 7, 2006 09:21:28 AM Report
wow, that was crazy. i was like omosh i remember that, cuz i used to cut. memeoirs flooded back. great poem!!! im adden it to my favs!!
Comment By: on November 13, 2006 08:44:55 PM Report
OMG....hun, thats so like, sad........wow, and very emotional and good....wow...keep it up....

dannie

p.s. this is one of my favs...





 


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