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Author Name: FreeBlueyd553 14 Comments
Date Added: September 18, 2010 00:09:39 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Morsels



 
Morsels



gentle words
lavishly you spread
in this darkened forest
like morsels of sweet biscuits

I carefully picked them up
one by one.

sunk down deep into pocket
know; kept they are

in perfect clutch of palm
held with tenderness

for nourishment
to my soul so blue.

now, when cold
and cloud threaten
I shall have them

to savor
in my rain
and be warmly
fed
then find 
my way
back 
to 
you




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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeanne on October 17, 2010 01:42:54 AM Report
This is beautiful :)
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on October 3, 2010 04:22:28 AM Report
If I feel the need to warm my soul with words then I always know just where to come and will never leave disappointed, excellent work as always~Graham.

Comment By: FreeDerral Gerken on September 30, 2010 12:31:35 PM Report
This is a very interesting and vivid write.  I was able to see these words as a sort movie in my head. I like how you transform the idea of words into sweet biscuits.  Very good.  Thank you.

Derral Gerken

Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on September 26, 2010 11:38:39 AM Report
What a blessing to have one whose words nourish the soul. And what a show of wisdom to gather and treasure those words as protection against life's outrages. This is warm and wonderful, Cindy. ML
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on September 21, 2010 01:35:57 PM Report
I don't know why, but I get a very warm feeling about this, I suppose it's because there appears to be a happy ending to this that just stirs up the romantic in me. Very well written Cindy, it takes you through love's emotions.   Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: FreeTristan on September 20, 2010 08:35:41 AM Report

A word of connection can complete the loneliest of hearts and nourish the soul until the full feast of relationship can be experienced in a moment yet to come. Nice work. Tristan


Comment By: FreeMoonStar on September 18, 2010 02:44:27 PM Report
Just fab Cindy.. I too am glad you took this out, I loved it!!  Way to go gal!

 

Moonie xx

Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on September 18, 2010 09:49:19 AM Report
Cindy, I am so glad you are re-posting some of your poems...this one especially, is such a treat to the reader.  love, love the forest theme and the idea of picking up little morsels for renewal of spirit.  Shared memories, placed in your pocket to lead two compatible souls back to each other...wonderful dedication!

and wonderful words to live by ...quite the opposite of burning bridges... I love your style!

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 18, 2010 07:57:33 AM Report
Oh... YOu have done it again with your romantic sweetness.... I love this....
Comment By: FreeSteve on September 2, 2008 01:24:31 PM Report
This poem is a taste of sweetness and enjoyable to read. 
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 29, 2006 04:54:10 AM Report
This is beautiful, Cindy..Simply splended free verse...The kind words of a dear friend as nourishment...Great stuff, kid...len
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on October 27, 2006 02:15:56 AM Report
MMMMMMMMMM.........good! This was yummy. I liked the sentiments here, we all need to have stores for a rainy day. Very sweet hun! =))

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on October 26, 2006 09:49:26 PM Report
Saga is fortunate to have a friend like you.  I like what this poem invokes for my thoughts.  It's true.  It is the morsels in life we should be after.  They are with us long after the large things fall into themselves and disappear.
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on October 25, 2006 06:54:03 PM Report
Beautiful dedication Cindy, words have more effect on people than we care to admit. In this case, they are words you cherish to help get you through some difficult times. You wrote it perfectly Cindy.     Henry




 


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