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Author Name: FreeJimiMuller 6 Comments
Date Added: January 23, 2003 22:01:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A Hidden Demon
A HIDDEN DEMON
Here this paper sits
Tear-stricken while i wonder if thats it
Do i have reason to be pissed?
What happens when the best alternative is death
Its to the point i cant see whats left
I understand what you said and i accept
What else can i do but lose
I dont mistake you people for fools
But every time we fight you have to use tools
You dont know why i must complain
My life is just that of a game
Apparently i have lost and i lose with no shame
No matter, feelings are the same to me
Some of the society is too ignorant to see
In order to make them, i will bleed
I can no longer control this evil DEMON
It hated itself as it grew from the semen
Now all it can do is be mean to them
Its called emptyness, it lives in all the others
Passed down through fathers and mothers
Its struck me as i cry under the covers
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAlex on June 5, 2005 05:01:42 PM Report
great great poem! my demon...damion wants to meet you. he's not mean. he's rather nice:) send me a message. :)

Alezandria
Comment By: FreeKatrina Leonna on March 21, 2004 11:04:40 PM Report
awesome...:)
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on September 8, 2003 07:56:19 PM Report
Very good description of teen-age turmoil.At that age,it's hard to tell right from day or night from wrong.It gets better.Nice write..Len
Comment By: FreeKeri on August 18, 2003 01:21:36 PM Report
Being a teen, I can relate. Your style is familiar to me and I like that, yet it is uniquely you. I like that even better. Just hang in there and you'll be fine. Oh, and yes, you're work is wonderful. Never question that. Sometimes writing is all you have. Great job.

~Keri~
Comment By: FreeSherese on July 9, 2003 04:00:49 PM Report
This describes exactly how im feeling now.
Seems as if something is in control of me,and i can't shake it loose. u got talent man. respect lovely piece.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 22, 2003 09:58:22 PM Report
INTERESTING POEM..




 


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