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Author Name: Freebluefish 2 Comments
Date Added: October 17, 2006 17:10:38 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Rib And Star

 

 

Completion is like a falling star

the crickets snug against the rain damp leaf

my rib against your rib.

Author's Notes:
Here is a attempt at a haiku.  I do not think it made it.
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Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on October 17, 2006 08:29:14 PM Report
~Andrew
I agree with Pamela...
Its all about the context and haiku's are not easy..at least for me.
Wonderful write...I love it!
Blessings to you my friend..
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on October 17, 2006 05:57:49 PM Report
Andrew...It made it...

The essence of Haiku, which is of greater importance than syllables, and mightily difficult to achieve I will add, has been beautifully executed...

This poems imagery and expression of content made me sigh... :o)

 

"my rib against your rib"...

Pamela





 


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