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Author Name: Freejohncarter 6 Comments
Date Added: October 15, 2006 04:10:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Till The End Of Time

Till The End Of Time




 




Till the end of time




My love will remain




Just a shadow




That cannot speak




Or whisper your name




 




The words inside are flowing




But without a tongue to speak




How can I ever tell you




When my love




Plays hide and seek




 




Till the end of time




I will always be




A shadow of a former me




Just a whisper




In a breeze of silence




 




 




 




 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on September 27, 2007 03:42:13 PM Report
This has some sad undertones and the every present longing for completion.  Beautiful work. ~Pamela
Comment By: Freeautumn on October 16, 2006 07:12:24 PM Report
this was a very good write... i really enjoyed the rhythm... your feeling jumps off the page... oh and a late welcome to the site... ~autumn
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 15, 2006 09:34:57 AM Report

Till the end of time


My love will remain


Just a shadow


That cannot speak


Or whisper your name

John, This kind of love is power within your heart.. love never really dies it just sometimes fades or is just whispers in the breathing winds.. Very moving poem with emotions felt
.~She Whispers

Comment By: FreeJoe on October 15, 2006 08:12:26 AM Report
Excellent write John, nicely expressed. Joe
Comment By: FreeAngel on October 15, 2006 06:23:03 AM Report

 


Till the end of time


I will always be


A shadow of a former me


Just a whisper


In a breeze of silence


 


 Beautiful and moving write

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: Freeleahlopez on October 15, 2006 05:52:02 AM Report
I love this poem. I guarantee this female will feel warm and loved inside.

-keep it up. x





 


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