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Author Name: Freebluefish 5 Comments
Date Added: October 14, 2006 17:10:13 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Love Song For Ursa Minor

 

 

i want to know

where do you go

in the depths of my sleep

somehow

i feel

that a  lesser star is hidden

within. the riddle of my body.

 

Come i will show

you the constellation

i belongi to

 the  far woods i walk through,

as the heavens  swarm  in my kiss.

you may smile

for i am just the  minor  loser--

just the smaller bear..

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on October 17, 2006 10:02:29 PM Report
~Andrew
Such a warming, beautiful write my friend...
Wonderful thoughts placed into this...
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeHeike on October 16, 2006 07:23:58 PM Report

There is nothing more intimate than sharing your dreams with someone... or the night sky that holds your shining counterpart.
Simply beautiful work, Andrew!
~Heike


 


Comment By: FreeWide Awake on October 16, 2006 06:33:14 PM Report
"I want to know
where do you go" ... :o) This is a real catcher :o) I like this :o)

"As the heavens swarm in my kiss"...lovely ~

Life is back and forth, we are neither constant losers nor constant winners,none of us, simply players...

Ach :o) You seem a huggable bear to me :o)

Hugs,
Little Fox~

Comment By: FreeCeeCee on October 15, 2006 02:46:24 PM Report
Interesting parellel to our constellations....loved the line..."I feel as if a lessor star is hidden within".

 

CeeCee

 

 

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 14, 2006 06:00:35 PM Report
Our dreams when we sleep, where do our thoughts really go?? love this my dear friend
. Hugs~ Scarlett





 


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