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Author Name: Freebluefish 2 Comments
Date Added: October 14, 2006 17:10:41 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Honeycomb

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i have almost forgotten

please forgive me

the letters that spell your name.

 

Proper nouns

i can no longer  speak.

for my finger tremble with verbs 

as i recite the luminous letters of  candles

and my back is  burdened

like saint christopher crossing a river.

The noun of all nouns

was bundled on his back..

 

For my mouth remember

the sting

of your  beautiful

bee haunted name

and i shall never empty

the honeycomb  that beats in my ribs..

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on October 17, 2006 10:31:32 PM Report
~Andrew,
Aweeeee...sweet write. Love so many lines with in this write..
*sigh*..lovely work!
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 14, 2006 05:47:40 PM Report
Andrew,

For my mouth remember


the sting


of your  beautiful


bee haunted name


and i shall never empty


the honeycomb  that beats in my ribs.... you have hooked me line and sinker..
Would you mine if I took some of your poems and took pieces out to build you a poem.. all credits will be yours.. I have done this several times with other poets?? If not that is ok... Smiles  ~Scarlett





 


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