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Author Name: Freebluefish 3 Comments
Date Added: October 14, 2006 17:10:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Be Without Leaves

 

 

shine on tommarrow

no matter how long the night

i shall in selflessness abide--

must i count the beads

of selfishness

Desire each an entanglement

a distraction

from the sharing of my life.

 

let in my prayers  cover

my ugliness

troll like satisfactions

leave my flesh

let me shine in serenity

or i am not worthy

to polish the stars with

the wormwood of my heart.

 

shine on tommarrow

oh great Lord above

for the trees are dying

and so let my pride

be without leaves.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on October 19, 2006 02:46:57 PM Report
I agree, making ones own desires a life goal is not a healthy or fulfilling thing...
There is always that balance to consider...

If we are happy and fulfilled then we shine even brighter, and reflect this joy upon others.

Happiness and receiving are not dirty words...

They say even JC was married :o) What do you think? Fiction or fantasy?  Did you read the DaVinci code?

HUGS,
Little Fox~


Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on October 17, 2006 07:10:09 AM Report
~Andrew
Time for me to leave, work is done for this day...
Hope to come back and read some more of your thoughts later.
Have a wonderful day...

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 14, 2006 05:42:20 PM Report
JUST AMAZING.. ... you seem to be reaching out for her .
Yet you pull away from what you want??
Tugs at my heart ..your wonderful..~ She Whispers





 


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