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Author Name: Freebluefish 3 Comments
Date Added: October 13, 2006 10:10:36 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Orbs Of My Eyes

i will club

that baby seal

when i come to it.

with its fur removed

i will not be cold

or my pockets empty

as i drink from

a loaned glass.

 

i raise my club.

But it often

makes my heart fell odd
at this angle

like another fellow is inside

and my memories numb

like a job where shoelaces

knot into resilience .

 

a frozen cosmos—

a resonance on my ribs

as a snowflakes

form  upon

he orbs of my eyes …

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on October 18, 2006 02:47:50 PM Report
Andrew.........

Probably one of your most poignant....

The first lines...had my breath caught in my throat...what an appaulling image...and then how you go on to elaborate and expand in the scope of its embraces to metaphor a universal greed...was simply marvellous...

"i raise my club.

But it often


makes my heart fell odd"...

Yes...I like the way you bring the liminal conscious, which most, even the most heartless might detect in themselves...that little whispering voice...

Excellent statement Andrew...Nicely penned as always~

Hugs,
Little Fox~



Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on October 14, 2006 06:22:06 AM Report
~Andrew
A very differant write that causes my heart sadness...
Where did this one come from?
Good write but so sad..
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 13, 2006 11:14:03 AM Report
Andrew, My __Goodness what a very sad poem.. this makes one feel very depressed indeed.. you do have a way with words my dear friend.. Hugs~ She Whispers




 


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