Today Is: Thursday, May 28, 2020 08:57 AM. Our Topic of the Week: Unity

Check our Help area first!

Comments? Suggestions?

Contact us now!

We like hearing feedback from members on how to improve the site!

Author Name: Freelady in hell 1 Comments
Date Added: September 24, 2006 03:09:08 Average Score: (Needs 2)
Views This Week
Members: 0
Unique Members: 0
Guests: 173
Total Views
Members: 12
Unique Members: 3
Guests: 544

Type: Unspecified
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only

My heart dies a slow death

My soul silently cries

My eyes suddenly floods

When I see you with her


My soul I feel shrinking

Myself I feel belittled

While being with you

Knowing I have to go


Iím lost when I am with you

And I think I am loving you

I donít know when, how or why

For it grew silently but deeply


I am loving you illegally

Coz legally it cannot be

The reason is beyond your thought

Coz youíve fallen in love unexpectedly


I love you beyond words

This crazy world can coin

I love you beyond emotion

Any terran can conceal


Canít you see my heart?

Canít you see it taking itís last breath?

Donít you hear my soulís silent cries?

Hear its voice being stifled?


An inner turmoil haunts me

Days and nights of my life

Emotions I am trying to hide

Is it not windowed in my eyes?


My voice is all muffled

My thoughts are all entangled

My ideas thrown in four winds

And confused are my feelings


Your heart is already captured

And youíre loving someone quietly

Someone whose heart weeps for you

 Someone who loves you too completely


My heart silently pleads

Hoping quietly itís me you are loving

My soul silently begs

To be itís me you are seeing


My heart longs and shouts

For someone unreachable like you

A barrier stands between us

That blocks away my path


Please tell me what to do

So I can stop the escalation of my love

Because loving you silently

Hurts so much like a pro


My silent pleas and cries

Destroys my solidarity

Amidst in my silent yearning

Breaks away my sanity


What am I to do with you?

Coz I am seeing my slow death

It is while loving you

While knowing Iíve to set you free


Am I to drift away from you?

Will this stop me from loving you?

Will it stop the intensifying pain?

Brought by my silent ordeal?





Author's Notes:
loving somebody silently is an ordeal...
Report Offensive Poem.

'SILENT ORDEAL' Copyright © Danielle
Copyright is property of the above author or group. Reproduction in whole or in part is strictly prohibited.
Click here if you feel this poem is in violation of a copyright.
Click here to send this poem to someone!

Comment By: FreeChristin Mowery on September 24, 2006 03:50:04 AM Report
This is a nice poem. I hope that you are not feeling this way, but if you are...tell him. What do you have to lose? What do you stand to gain?


Check for Announcements.
on our Home page!

User poems are sometimes graced by images and textures stored on our site
courtesy of, Sandy Hradil, and Sherri Emily.

Welcome, Guest!

Become part of our
friendly community
of on-line writers!

Join today!
Forget Username or Password?

Members On Line: 1
Guests On Line: 63
Members in Chat: 0


Happy Birthday

We Thank You!

For your donations
and subscriptions!
P.O. Box 7931
The Woodlands, TX 77387

Copyright © 2003-2017  All Rights Reserved. Use of this site is subject to certain
Terms of Service rules which constitute a legal agreement between you and
By providing links to other sites, neither approves of, endorses, or gurantees
any information, opinions, or products found on those sites. Users follow links at their own risk.