Today Is: Monday, April 06, 2020 06:13 PM. Our Topic of the Week: 2019

Check our Help area first!

Comments? Suggestions?

Contact us now!

We like hearing feedback from members on how to improve the site!

Author Name: FreeEyeSeeAll 1 Comments
Date Added: September 22, 2006 18:09:31 Average Score: (Needs 2)
Views This Week
Members: 0
Unique Members: 0
Guests: 117
Total Views
Members: 11
Unique Members: 9
Guests: 700

Type: Unspecified
Category: General Add To Favorites | Text Only
The Kingdom's Fall
Dry castle walls have fallen
to a state of disrepair.
Bright flowers in the garden
have all succumbed to despair.

Old stones collect in shadows
of what once had been so grand.
Sad willows of the forest
have forgotten how to stand.

Empty aged hallways beckon
to once again be traveled.
Cracked ivy covered stanchions
struggle to come unraveled.

Many new subjects have come
and amongst the ruins lived well.
Yet none of them had the means
to break wicked madmanís spell.

The banished queen was missing,
grieving King so seldom seen.
Majestic ruined lawns wilted
dark brown death consuming green.

And so the kingdom suffered
exhausted by madmanís greed.
Yet defied with inner strength
with more blood yet left to bleed.
Author's Notes:
Report Offensive Poem.

'The Kingdom's Fall' Copyright © Tobi
Copyright is property of the above author or group. Reproduction in whole or in part is strictly prohibited.
Click here if you feel this poem is in violation of a copyright.
Click here to send this poem to someone!

Comment By: PremiumEric Siedzikowski on October 10, 2009 03:41:01 AM Report
An inciteful piece that I found to be well structured.Another masterpiece of course that you have written.



Check for Announcements.
on our Home page!

User poems are sometimes graced by images and textures stored on our site
courtesy of, Sandy Hradil, and Sherri Emily.

Welcome, Guest!

Become part of our
friendly community
of on-line writers!

Join today!
Forget Username or Password?

Members On Line: 0
Guests On Line: 78
Members in Chat: 0

Happy Birthday

We Thank You!

For your donations
and subscriptions!
P.O. Box 7931
The Woodlands, TX 77387

Copyright © 2003-2017  All Rights Reserved. Use of this site is subject to certain
Terms of Service rules which constitute a legal agreement between you and
By providing links to other sites, neither approves of, endorses, or gurantees
any information, opinions, or products found on those sites. Users follow links at their own risk.