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Author Name: Freelady in hell 0 Comments
Date Added: September 22, 2006 11:09:04 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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In the shadows of my being

I carry the burden of my life

That came from the deepest part

Of the dimmest dungeon of castle


A mind full of nonsense thoughts

My cranial bone contains

A pretentious heart I hide

Inside the paradise in me


My soul is trapped in your tower

Having giving up the last protocol

Lost in the darkest space I am

Like one of the hundred herds


I have in me the clarity

Though nobody is taking pity

Breaking up my own sanity

Guided by my solidarity


In the darkest alley I am walking

 A single light I can not see

Nothing else to guide me

In the beginning of my journey


Beyond the dim alley

I creep on my knees

Finding out my own way

By feeling the ground beneath


In the shadows of your smile

I gather my unbeatable strength

Undeniably helping me

In fighting uncommon obstacles


In my never-dying shoe

Yourself may you put

But hopefully give up you wont

With what’s inside to pop




Author's Notes:

My life is my castle... there are no slaves for it's my soul that is enslaved

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