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Author Name: FreeEyeSeeAll 5 Comments
Date Added: September 04, 2006 00:09:59 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Unforgiveable
Deafening silence
assaults my ears
and screams to me
of their absence.
Leaving my mind
free to dwell
on happier times.
Opening a path
that memories find
to infect my soul
with days gone by.

Deafening silence
shrouds me in misery
as it mocks me
with the absence
of their sweet laughs.
My empty heart longs
for their warm bodies
which bring redemption.
My tortured mind replays
my horrid mistakes…
Repeatedly.

Deafening silence
fills the air I breathe
with loneliness
and an aching need
for those I discarded
without thought
to painful consequences.
Past days fill my vision
with moments shared.
I watch as memories wither…
Unappreciated.

Deafening silence
thunders in my ears.
Taking the place
of their childish chatter
which spoke in whispers
to the depths of my soul.
The weight of my sins
hang heavy in the silence.
Reflections of their presence
shimmer in the distance…
And disappear.
Author's Notes:
Some mistakes are unforgiveable...I pay the piper every other Sunday night when my children go back to their dad...
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngelique on September 10, 2006 12:14:27 PM Report
There are times I see your soul's tears on a page. This is one of them. May you one day find that the "unforgivable"  was redeemed. And may your children one day help you heal from the wounds you feel you caused. Your such a beautiful soul and it breaks my heart to know you have to carry this weight in yours.

Elequently said, as always friend.

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 7, 2006 12:36:21 AM Report
Deafening silence
thunders in my ears.
Taking the place
of their childish chatter
which spoke in whispers
to the depths of my soul.
The weight of my sins
hang heavy in the silence.
Reflections of their presence
shimmer in the distance…
And disappear.
.............................. the heart of you......~She Whispers
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on September 6, 2006 09:01:08 AM Report
Dear Crystal*~
This is such a moving piece, and one of great angst~  I felt the pain within the lines, and I saw the memories flashing for you in rewinds~  You have brought us raw emotion in reflected memory....
Good work, Crystal, this brings us another facet of your talent...

Margaret.....an old bag lady

Comment By: FreeS on September 5, 2006 10:47:20 PM Report
excellent work, i love the message, its very strong

 

-recalcitrant

Comment By: FreeRichard Michael Cronin on September 4, 2006 09:37:27 AM Report
yeah, sometimes all we can do, is hope to learn from them. Albeit it can be a very painful lesson!

Nice write.





 


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