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Author Name: FreeNewKing 2 Comments
Date Added: September 02, 2006 18:09:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Broken dreams

"Deceived! Attacked! betrayed!"
You could hear the little boy scream
And you could hear small crushing sounds
As the people all stepped on his dream

"But it all went so well" he said
And he cried, and cried some more
It had went well at first
But then he dropped it all on the floor

"LEAVE!!" He yelled
"Go away and leave me alone!"
And people left him, well he asked them to
And he just sat there, a kid, all alone..

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeFlis R on December 20, 2007 09:45:37 AM Report
This is heartbreaking!
I hope he managed to put all the pieces
of his dream back together again...
xx

Comment By: FreeAdri on September 4, 2006 08:32:43 AM Report

There is an element of extreme sadness in this poem.  Wonderfully written with a lot of emotion...  I like this.  Great work.
Adri x






 


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