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Author Name: Freebluefish 2 Comments
Date Added: August 30, 2006 14:08:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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in the spaces of my ribs

there is i think a place for you

i am not certain

often i try to read

the characters that the angels

write on the surfaces

of my skin.

rings that are  flowing

in the awkward parchment of my body.


looking for some understanding

my mind does not bloom

unless it dwells on you

your smoothness

finds in me

a loss of language

words that seem to bump

and refract off your lips

or  bounce off the nap of  your neck...

some of my speaking

seems to become lost

in the corners of your eyes.

ever smirking aliens

departed language

that has left the habitations

 of my breath

 as  your eyes burn

me with an unspellable nudeness.

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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 30, 2006 11:22:36 PM Report
I don't know who kisses your heart but who ever she is... this love must be awesome.. I have missed your heart of thoughts.. Hugs ~ She Whispers
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on August 30, 2006 06:35:09 PM Report
Truly lovely write..
The write as a whole is inspiring, found many lines to be favorites..
May she keep the inspiration flowing, whom ever she is.


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