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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 5 Comments
Date Added: August 28, 2006 20:08:02 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Shades Of Rapture Co- Written with Joe



The starkness of the sun begins its slow decline

Red tinted horizon over dense thorn bush

Shadows make their appearance

Mist creeps into sheer curtains of purple ribbons

Lashes of sparkling twilight are unstoppable with vivid patterns

Suggestive moments wrapped up tranquil essence of rapture


Night sounds begin to play their  harmonious melodies

A symphonic choir of nature’s creatures

Fills the stillness of eerie silence 

Purple silver clouds skirt across the face of the haunting moon

 Studded stars are  woven into a blanket of black velvet curtains

Suddenly a shooting star electrifies and sprinkles

stardust across the painted sky


Soft footfalls stealthily move

Gliding ethereal over plains of grass

Flitting shadows in half cast light


~A Ponygirl Design~
Sweet pony girl1/deltamidis1/breeze mid



Author's Notes:
Joe, once again I really enjoyed putting this poem together... This poem you sent me .... Your words made me feel every line I wrote.. Your talent is just awesome... Hugs ~ She Whispers
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Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on August 31, 2006 12:29:07 AM Report
Lovely and visually stunning...great work both of you.


Comment By: Freetom on August 29, 2006 06:49:53 PM Report
beautiful penning Joe and India wonderful mages and visions excellent

handshakes and hugs kisses


Comment By: FreeAngel on August 29, 2006 02:31:06 PM Report
Beautiful you two you make a great  team


Love Angelxxx

Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on August 29, 2006 12:15:03 AM Report
What a beautiful poem you and Joe have penned, beautiful lady. You two make a great team. It's as if you are painting your' poems with vivid colors of ink. Absolutely breath-taking sis...Love, Tiger Rose
Comment By: FreeCeeCee on August 28, 2006 09:56:42 PM Report
You two are an awsome team!  Great music too.





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