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Author Name: Premiumtinadee 4 Comments
Date Added: August 25, 2006 18:08:50 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Villain that dwells within.

The Villain that dwells within.

You ask, who is the villain?
It is the beast that dwells within.
Where are the creatures, that dwell in the dark?
That leaves footprints, deep in the park.
You ask, who is the villain?
It is the beast that dwells within.
Whose shadows appear on the wall,
That scream and howl, your name they call.
You ask, who is the villain?
It is the beast that dwells within.
With cackles and a sinister laugh,
It is you, it is your devilish half.
You ask, who is the villain?
It is the beast that dwells within.
It is the devil that dwells with in.
Its you, who is the beastly villain.
Author's Notes:
That back round noise was created by Rich G. who made it for me one halloween.
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Comment By: PremiumCliffton Clay Cromberg on April 22, 2010 12:44:07 PM Report
Tina, awesome write... The Beast/Demon who lives within and most of us are unaware of the beast within? We know there is Good and Evil, Devil and Angel... We struggle with the Beast everyday... Amazing write... Clay
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on September 9, 2006 01:48:50 PM Report
Tina:  well, gee, I do understand about that beast/demon who lives within.....

but it does make Life interesting if scary at times.



Lady Dragonwyck

Comment By: FreeJeff on September 6, 2006 03:52:14 PM Report
This is very good...loved the opening lines.

You are a great writer Tina.



Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on August 25, 2006 06:10:23 PM Report
Well, I love my other half,
that piece of me that makes me whole,
I need him to survive,
he's the half that completes my soul.

I have learned to embrace him,
and I have learned to admire this side,
I look forward to seeing him,
I no longer run away from him and hide.

I need this villian inside of me,
I feel he may be my better half,
Up to now I took life to seriously,
he has shown me how to laugh.


Terrific write Tina, I couldn't resist, Joe


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