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Author Name: Adminrich53 7 Comments
Date Added: July 30, 2006 04:07:22 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Another World
 

I've been to another world,
Felt it's soil, seen it's skies.
A place far better,
Where sun always shines.

An alternate dimension,
A place in it's own time.
More than my waking dream,
As real as you and I.

You showed me it's wonders,
And now I'm left to dream.
About a vision I don't want to leave,
A location I forever want to be.

I visit at very special times,
Never long enough.
I live in that wonderful world,
Whenever you're with me.

 
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Written 5/15/06

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMichael T. Perrault on October 20, 2012 09:24:18 PM Report
!!! YES !!!
Comment By: FreeCathy on June 10, 2008 04:12:52 PM Report
Everyone wants to be in the other world Excellent poem with such emotion Loved it
Cathy

Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on August 7, 2006 11:01:42 PM Report
Ah, but the real party starts when the sun goes down. loll Wonderful poem richard
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on August 6, 2006 11:45:23 PM Report
Love really is "another world".  Thank heaven.  Well done, Rich.  ML
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 5, 2006 07:23:19 PM Report
Flying to the moon and gazing on the stars...Love can transport you to many beautiful and wonder-filled places...LOvely poem, Rich...Yer pal, len
Comment By: FreeGlata on July 31, 2006 01:32:24 PM Report
This is great! Sometimes those moments are what makes life worth living...

Beautiful work, Rich...

Hugs!

Glata

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 30, 2006 08:30:59 AM Report
Rich, 
 Sometimes all we have are left over dreams.. a place we just don't want to leave,, we cherish every moment..because it is all we have.. this says it all my dearest friend,,(((

I visit at very special times,
Never long enough.
I live in that wonderful world,
Whenever you're with me...

Your poetry really moves my heart strings more than you know..Hugs ~ Scarlett





 


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