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Author Name: Freeramonathompson 1 Comments
Date Added: July 25, 2006 19:07:13 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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When A Man Hits A Woman
written to show men just how stupid they sound when they try to defend their actions of hitting a helpless woman.

Day after day
Night after night
Society lets them get away with it
The damsels in distress
Crying, pouting, lying through their teeth
Packing their bags and leaving with the kids
Ought to be a law againest their kind
These witches sent straight from the depths of hell
They're the meaning behind this non love song
They're the reason why I don't see nothing wrong with it


When a man hits a woman
Teaching his old lady a lesson tonight
She won't soon forget
Shut up and listen or get a fist in her mouth
Don't talk back
Don't give him no sass
Cos he's only taking his god given right
Putting her in her place
When a man hits a woman

Don't mean to sound cruel
Ain't sayin' that it's all right everytime
Just some of the time
Like when you come home to find your old lady giving it to another man
Or when she strikes you first
Then baby it's just gotta be an eye for an eye
No getting out of it
Gotta stand up and do your duty
Knock that booty around the room once or twice and she'll learn
Ain't nothing wrong with it
The fitting punishment for her crime
She was a ho so now she's got to know


Ain't nobody can tell me I'm wrong when I'm right
King of my castle
I'll treat my woman like a queen
But if some night I find that she deserves it
Then it's gonna be one hell of a fight
A yelling and a screaming
All over the house we'll be breaking stuff
Ram bam I'd thank you to shut up now mam
Know that I am number 1 and you are number 2
No ifs, ands or buts about it
Says so right here in my holy book of man laws


Might lose a few teeth
Might have to hide a bruise or two
But that's just the way sometimes it's gotta be
Can't have any of my rules broken
Can't have her thinking that she's better then me
We're equal baby or we ain't nothing at all
It's a tough love but somebody's gotta do it
Teach you the right from the wrong in this world
So just you be quiet now
Quit with all your moaning, groaning, and complaining
Go get me another beer and listen to this song that I'm singing for you
Strumming on my old guitar our brand new anthem



2006 RAMONA THOMPSON (All rights reserved)


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Comment By: FreeSara on July 25, 2006 10:10:16 PM Report
wow, a very powerful poem, but it made me very sad. very creative tho


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