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Author Name: FreeYumiko_Monou 7 Comments
Date Added: July 05, 2006 16:07:05 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Whever knew she coudl be that beautiful?

He pulls a tasseled brush

And lays it on the page

Through swish and strokes

She’s lain upon the once white page

 
 
In a silk white gown she stares

Up into the dawn of morn

Black ribbons through hair

And red ones form her wrists

 
 
She strikes a pose and dies

A smile on her lips

Gently she closes tired eyes

And falls to the autumn ground

Where she will never be found

 
 
Like a petal from a rose she lays

Beautiful and broken in the leaves

People stare in wonder

At what appears to be a girl in slumber

 
 
So after striking a pose she died inside

Who ever knew…

She could be such a beautiful suicide…

Author's Notes:
sorry about teh repost needed to make som edits...Please comment if you read...
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMegan on July 15, 2008 05:28:01 PM Report
I like this a lot. It is a moving piece of poetry.
Comment By: FreeBrittani Bylsma on October 30, 2006 03:52:49 PM Report
this is very, very, pretty. Props to the author!


Comment By: FreeDreamBreaker on August 8, 2006 07:18:37 AM Report
O.O WOW. That was just amazing. Brilliant!!!! That is like one of the best poems I have read!

Wow.

just

wow

Holly

Comment By: FreeJessica on July 24, 2006 04:03:33 AM Report
Woah............

Brilliant.

Absoulutely.

I rarely read a poem that i really like, because i am very critical, but its awesome.

Comment By: FreeCourtney Bliss on July 8, 2006 03:40:06 AM Report
omg this poem was a very enjoyable read, i love the way you captured every aspect of the image in writing, you seem to be a very very talented writer. i hope to read more poems from you in the near future!!

-a fan

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on July 6, 2006 04:39:17 AM Report
Very little to criticize in this really, I think its beautiful.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 5, 2006 11:25:55 PM Report
BEAUTIFUL LADY... THANK YOU FOR YOUR BEAUTIFUL COMMENTS.. ~ SHE




 


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