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Author Name: Freenoahcount 6 Comments
Date Added: June 27, 2006 01:06:20 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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this night
I know these night clouds
dark and gray
a furrowed brow
fleeting, begging to stay
forever traveling
who knows where?
ancient waters
fill the air
I knew these night clouds
when they beckoned once
but I just stood there dreaming
expecting rain
 
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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 5, 2007 11:18:38 PM Report
Noah,
How  well I understand this kind of lonely!! The cloak of darkness can also heal!!
Meet you under the full moon only the night whispers !!
 ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 4, 2006 10:28:37 PM Report
Noah, this is a poem that makes one stop and think. Our expectations and the outcome may be worlds apart.

 

The word "dreaming" interrupted the flow of this poem for me. To me, it "tells" and does not "show"...definitely taking away from the piece, rather than adding to it. But that is just my humble opinion...for what it is worth.

 

Fine penning Noah! =))

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on September 4, 2006 11:27:44 AM Report

This is an example of why and how someone like me came to poetry.


I was brought up with it but the inferance was that only "poets" wrote like this. So seeing myself yet again as unworthy I simply read.

Then something was born in me through the reading!!! I realised that mankind has wrestled with the same agony of soul sinse the beginning of time. If that was so? then my agony / ecstacy was as valid as anybody else...so I started to write.

 

Ali x

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on August 2, 2006 11:32:25 PM Report
Noah ...I love this write, the feel, the mood, every carefully chosen word...the dark quality it conveys....one of my faves of yours.

~Cindy

 

*please empty your inbox so i can send ya a thank you sweety*

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on June 30, 2006 05:53:53 PM Report
Hmm...no point kicking ourselves for hindsight is there Noah...
Maybe I read this wrong~

Len's right...it feels very forlorn and lonesome...you chose the perfect metaphors~

HUGS~
Pamela

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 27, 2006 06:43:30 AM Report
Pregnant with unfulfilled possibilities..A lonesome write, Count...len




 


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