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Author Name: FreeJimiMuller 4 Comments
Date Added: August 20, 2003 17:08:06 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Master Of Puppets
NOTE: This poem was inspired by the song "Master of Puppets" by Metallica. This poem also contains part of the song "Master of Puppets" by Metallica.
Have you been toying with me?
Is any of it true?
I'm not upset
I cant hurt you

Lead me around
Do whatever you feel
I have to follow
Even if it isnt real

Master of puppets
I'm lead by these strings
Falsity or truth
Still you twist things

Down a lonely path
I have no choice
I cant say no
I have no voice

You leave me here
You cast me away
You put down my strings
Now I must stay

Master of puppets
I must cut these strings
So I can get away
From my once king

Try and try again
Forever I shall fight
These strings now fray
And are not held so tight

I will reverse everything
You will be my puppet and
Now everything is ready
For me to take command

Master of puppets
I'm pulling your strings
Twisting your mind
And smashing your dreams


Author's Notes:
I like this poem. I believe it is now my favorite.
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Comment By: FreeWhitney on March 10, 2004 07:46:40 PM Report
Wow that was really well written and i love metallica! I like how you turned their song into your own poem.
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on December 13, 2003 05:55:34 PM Report
Dear James-
Before I read the top statement,
I got to the end and thought of Metallica-
I too like to take a song that completely
takes over my brain and start my own creation of thought-
Music is an excellent way to open up your thought process!
Great re-creation-
Comment By: FreeJason Brown on September 28, 2003 10:33:06 AM Report
Great Write
I love Metalica
Jason Brown
Comment By: FreeBeautiful Hatred on August 20, 2003 05:51:00 PM Report
this is a great poem. i too am a metallica fan. nicely done. great job and keep writing


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