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Author Name: FreeAtrophiedRibbons 7 Comments
Date Added: June 22, 2006 22:06:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
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October Ghost
Dear Sleeper,

The rain is falling from the greycast
The window's open, and your skin's so cold
You've lived through hell but slept through the bloodbath
Oh Sleeper, I'll hold your hand until you come home
Author's Notes:
I'm sad...but I don't blame you, and I don't think that what you did was selfish.
We're all entitled to our exits.

you. are. loved.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on October 23, 2013 12:31:13 PM Report
So, sad........
Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on October 16, 2011 09:56:22 PM Report
you.are.loved
Comment By: PremiumEric Siedzikowski on August 17, 2009 11:11:39 AM Report
good poem
Comment By: FreeVince on September 1, 2008 03:16:54 AM Report

Rarely do i give "detailed critiques"...only because i know so little when it comes to the technical side of poetry.

So all i can offer is that this is one of the best things i've read in quite some time. Good job since i find good reads hard to come by.

Thanks for sharing.

-vince


Comment By: FreeZoila on May 25, 2008 08:52:00 PM Report
mhmm.. this was powerful!..full of visuals emotion and careing...nice write!...my favorite line was #4.....itsaid so much...

-zlc

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 7, 2006 06:12:03 PM Report
Such sadness yet the hand of love to help them  to live in this sleeper state!
Great poem... India~ She

Comment By: FreeShruti on June 22, 2006 11:02:24 PM Report
Beautiful!! I loved this piece. It was short, simple, and powerful!!




 


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