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Date Added: June 19, 2006 14:06:43 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Pondering Pelicans

In an inexpressive moment

They descended and sat motionless in the water.

Thousands of wings

silenced by an unexplained energy,                

each bird facing the other like on a coat of arms;

Rustic browns, dull greys, pale whites,

against a bright, blue horizon,

on an ivory Sea.

Fishes seemed lacking,

no fishing boats wandering either.

I’ve seen them before….

but never in this magnitude,

for I swear they were summoned there

in their thousands.

What did they perceive that I didn’t

in those precocious minutes?

In that brief period of movelessness

where winds and waves were absent,

what did they know?

Then as if by a sixth sense

they all ascended and flew away….

Leaving me and my thoughts adrift….

Leaving an inquiring mind none the wiser…...

 

Author's Notes:
I stopped by the Sea for a few minutes on Father's Day.
 
....well they had me pondering actually......
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on September 23, 2006 12:34:06 PM Report
nothing unusual happens by accident. We are spoken to by our Creator many, many times and yet we need to open our perception to the other reality to understand that divine connection.

What a truly wonderful revelation and gift was given to you my dear sister.

I saw it in my mind's eye as I read your poem and knew without a shadow of doubt this was a very special sight to uplift you.

What does a pelican mean to you? What message in the form of nature God sent you???

He knows you are closest to Him and your loved ones by the water. That is where He will speak to you always.

Into favs for me to be read and re-read.

Ali xxx

Comment By: FreeAbbas on July 16, 2006 07:08:20 AM Report
You pondered it well, and so well is your visualisation too.

 

Abbas.

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on July 11, 2006 09:18:31 PM Report
I enjoyed how you left this open ended at the conclusion.  The answer is not important, but the subtle glimpse of the poet is in this piece is.  Without it the retorical question loses its power.  Enjoyed the write!
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on June 24, 2006 03:26:09 PM Report
Nicely done Sharon, the sea is my refuge as well. We don't have pelicans up here though, just gulls, Joe
Comment By: FreeJeff on June 22, 2006 07:34:49 AM Report
This poem is a good reason of why I love your writing so much.

Simply wondeful!

Jeff

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on June 20, 2006 05:09:25 PM Report
Wonderful capturing of one of those mysteious moments in nature.

I have seen this before as well...and too found it poignant and awe inspiring...curious.
And it made me ponder as well :)

Beautifully portrayed, lovely images...I could smell the salt on the ocean (though you made no mention)...really brought me there.

Best wishes,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 20, 2006 12:49:07 AM Report
Sharon, this is awesome.. all we ned to do is Stop.look and listen...Hugs ~ she
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 19, 2006 09:11:02 PM Report
I once sneaked up on a pelican while it was pondering some deep thought or other..Scared the bajeebers out of him..:O)...len




 


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