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Author Name: Freefanofjims 25 Comments
Date Added: August 19, 2003 16:08:07 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Castle in the Sky~3A
Castle in the Sky
By James L Lagoski
© 02-05-03
Dedicated to the ICP

We’re all searching for direction
Upon these paths we roam
While trying to find instructions
That will lead us back to home

I had drifted on the oceans
Where a lot of men have drown
Until I heard the wisdom
Of 2 crazy juggalo clowns

They spoke of the atrocities
That we live with everyday
Heard them speak about the sickness
It seems will never go away

They talked about a lot of things
We try to hide in shame
They tried to tell us all
That inside we’re all the same

They came from the inner city
From a place we call the hood
They rose out of the middle
Between all lifes bad and good

Described a land called Shangri-La
As a castle in the sky
And a long remembered promise
They made to a butterfly

Told the world that they were wicked
So some will never understand
But everything is going
Just exactly as they planned
Author's Notes:
Written about the Insane Clown Posse and all at Dark Lotus-
To the message they send to the comman man which is if your heart is innocent,
Be who you are, We are accepted for who we were in this life,
not what we think society believes each individual should portray-

All the criminals and the thugs,
All the punks and all the scrubs
To the ones who are put down,
Everything will come around,
To the snobs who think they're it
What you give is what you get
Someones adding up the score
Go ahead and add some more
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on January 9, 2009 08:45:57 PM Report
Deep write, well-rhymed , balanced, flowing. Enjoyable to read.
Super good.. CONGRATULATIONS...

Comment By: Freemystical angel on July 13, 2007 11:33:38 AM Report
i got here reading your comments and i found your poem most enchanting
more than i have read before
i would read more of you for sure

Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on June 26, 2007 07:54:00 AM Report
brilliant poem, gotta read more of your work, bravo

Comment By: FreeChrista Carroll on September 27, 2005 12:17:11 AM Report
hehe, very nice job! I'm glad someone else found some lyrical deepness from ICP. I enjoyed this a lot! Thanks for sharing!
Comment By: FreeCathy on July 28, 2005 12:21:54 AM Report
Beautifully written your words so captivating. Excellent job with this Loved it
Cathy
Comment By: FreeDavid Rojas on May 11, 2005 06:57:47 PM Report
My friend James,

It's hard to interpret horrorcore rappers such as ICP; You did it perfectly.
Alot of us are so critical of the surface of things and then are deterred from ever digging deeper to find meanings in lyrical mastery such as ICP.
A very good band indeed, eventhough they are labled as a blemish on society. They do practice what they preach and they are, in all aspects, themselves.

i appreciate the perspective.

your friend and admirer,
Rojas.
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on November 12, 2004 08:50:07 AM Report
WOW! ICP isn't too bad I guess. But to each his own. Right? You did a great job. *S* Cynthia
Comment By: Freegrneyedbtch on August 10, 2004 02:57:44 AM Report
i like icp and i love this poem....you're my fave on this site...you definately know how to write a poem, and you always have a good, strong message. thank you for sharing. 0livia Treasure McKinnon
Comment By: FreeBrittany on August 3, 2004 11:49:30 PM Report
this poem is great.......... and i think icp is great too
Comment By: Freeartandsoul on August 1, 2004 04:42:34 PM Report
CONGRATULATIONS AN YOU AWARD. IT IS WELL DESERVED.
TANYA
Comment By: FreeRohaida on July 19, 2004 04:53:21 AM Report
James,
I simply don't get tired readin this one over and over again.You've done it again,my friend.Fabulous writer you are.
Rohaida
Comment By: FreeHelen on May 9, 2004 06:29:31 PM Report
hmmmmm.... no comments... but there's feedback.
Comment By: FreeWarran Sander on December 3, 2003 03:00:21 AM Report
that poem is tight ICP kicks ass
Comment By: FreeMary F. Charest on October 4, 2003 07:06:08 PM Report
Great poem with a powerful message.
Mary
Comment By: FreeKathy on October 3, 2003 01:07:01 PM Report
Excellent write!
Comment By: FreeJason Brown on September 30, 2003 09:59:08 PM Report
Great Poem
Simply Great
Jason Brown
Comment By: FreeGlata on September 30, 2003 01:52:14 PM Report
Had to come back again to tell you, again, I LOVE YOUR WRITING! This is another fine example of your prowess with words. You have a divine talent, James, my friend.
Proud to call you my friend! Thanks for all the encouragement along the way since we've met. You will never know how much I appreciate you. :o)
***** Glata
Comment By: FreeAlec Wilson on September 29, 2003 04:36:11 PM Report
Just a great poem James. Well done. Alec
Comment By: FreeGlata on September 29, 2003 08:36:13 AM Report
Whoa! Great piece! But then, I think all of them are great. Your talent is awesome!
Glata
Comment By: Freeharmnoi on September 28, 2003 11:45:01 AM Report
great poem
Comment By: Freeclaire fernandez on September 12, 2003 10:56:22 PM Report
i loved your poem!
Comment By: FreeDenel on August 20, 2003 08:57:41 AM Report
you are such a great writer James - great work!
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 19, 2003 06:51:05 PM Report
Smashin'~!....Keep your pen in your hand and keep writing....Margaret
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 19, 2003 04:44:05 PM Report
WHAT A GREAT POEMS IT SAYS IT ALL
Comment By: FreeLance Binkley on August 19, 2003 04:31:29 PM Report
Cool poem.




 


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