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Author Name: FreeDevineangel 16 Comments
Date Added: May 03, 2006 10:05:45 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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ARABIAN KNIGHTS

 

ARABIAN    KNIGHTS

Dark stallions appear from the dunes
Stood on hind legs brown manes flying
Masters hold tight their reins of leather
Arabian knights in dust left sighing

Eyes of beauty a glowing flame
Passions grasp hijab covers grace
Cheeks as red as the rose in bloom
Singing to the wind in desserts race

Fighting for beauty would die by her side
Jihad of the heart and soul elixir of life
Pedestal persona spirited surrender
Determined to take her as his wife

The night sky shining appliquéd stars
Mysterious woman come take my hand
On a mystical journey we will express
Loves passionate desires in the sand

                                 

                                     

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Comments:
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on July 9, 2006 03:15:18 PM Report
Wonderful vibrant images.  Truly majestic in verse and word.  Another pleasure to read and indulge in. ~Pam
Comment By: FreeDarkness Rides This Night on July 5, 2006 08:10:36 AM Report
Your words are magnificent as always. Beautifully crafted. And your picture is amazing. A true inspiration I think..! Very well done my friend..!  
Comment By: FreeMario on June 10, 2006 01:58:49 AM Report
I can picture this well. So Passionate.

Love

~Mario

Comment By: FreeRoy Rover on May 19, 2006 03:42:32 AM Report
A virtual 'Desert Song'...This is magic; in my mind I hear the music and see the lady carried off into a misting night...Your poem gives inspired thinking and widens the scope of imagination...A lovely write, poetic Angel...Simply Devine!...Roy.
Comment By: FreeAbbas on May 18, 2006 03:46:16 PM Report
Lady! here comes your prince charming
Get going as he shall not hold long
For not that he dont intends to stop by
But because death follows him along

Abbas.
Comment By: FreeRobert Smith on May 17, 2006 06:31:40 AM Report
Angel, I am loving working through your portfolio, this was an excellent write with descriptive qualities of a true wordsmith! - Rob
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on May 14, 2006 07:49:05 AM Report
Angel,
This the work of a master poet! Showpiece for all to see!
Your words take us on a mystical journey. You chose a picture so hauntingly enchanting and seductive it is amazing.
Is this is a picture of you? Stunning!
Yours .......................Fletch
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 12, 2006 04:33:11 PM Report
ANGEL,
WOW, THIS IS A MASTERPIECE!! ***** WISH I COULD HAVE FOUND A PICTURE LIKE THIS... WHEN I DID MINE...ALL I COULD FINE WAS A PRETTY LADY...WHERE DO YOU GET YOUR SIGS I NEED SOME NEW ONES?? IT'S PERFECT .. YOUR TALENT IS JUST OUTSTANDING...HUGS ~ SHE
Comment By: FreeJoe on May 9, 2006 03:20:58 PM Report
THIS IS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN, I HAD TO COME AND READ IT AFTER YOU SAID YOU HAD SUBMITTED IT. A DEFINITE FAVOURITE FOR SHORE.
JOE
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on May 8, 2006 06:51:01 AM Report
Great work on this Angel! You evoke such strong images here, I almost felt like I was there! Henry
Comment By: PremiumKeith Overstreet on May 4, 2006 12:09:01 AM Report
Made me smile, Angel.
wonderful job!
Keith
Comment By: Freemystical angel on May 3, 2006 02:36:46 PM Report
now thats the work of an angel
great
the flame in her eyes and the fire in your poem
great again!
Comment By: FreeRichard Michael Cronin on May 3, 2006 01:08:45 PM Report
what can I say...this is well....devine! bravo!
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on May 3, 2006 01:00:12 PM Report
Terrific, descriptive and creative write Angel, as I am pulling the sand from my shorts! LOL! Joe
Comment By: Freetom on May 3, 2006 10:46:33 AM Report
WOW so very vivid the description of the poem the scenes are beautiful and the poem is lovely, passionate and a soft senual penning excellent Angel
hugs kisses
tom
and the picture is a perfect match for your poem.
Comment By: FreePoetic Soldier on May 3, 2006 10:42:33 AM Report
Very vivid poem,the images of both the words and the actual picture stand out very well and you described it all so well.

Nathaniel




 


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