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Date Added: April 24, 2006 08:04:14 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Smell Like a Rose~7

Smell Like A Rose

Sometimes this life can bring you down
And we feel every beat our hearts pound
Sometimes just when you start to get ahead
Weíre surrounded by problems we canít shed

There are times we donít know what to say
And canít stand it when we feel this way
Yet while completely lost without a clue
Somehow you know youíll make it through

We wonder how we will keep it together
When trapped by lifeís stormy weather
Confusion keeps your mind from thinking
Within the void where youíve been sinking

So we each must remember this fact we know
Emotions like these may come but they go
For this is the way that life sometimes goes
Not everydayís going to smell like a rose

Author's Notes:

This piece is from the pages of my up-coming 7th book-
The Journey~Signs of the 7th Level-
As lifes little problems seem to consume us there are many dealing
with major setbacks right now-
All over the world people have lost their homes, memories and lives of
loved ones due to devistating weather conditions-
Others through ignorence of war and destruction-
Yet I constantly am subjected to hearing people complain daily-
So may these words help you reflect the problems of others instead
of looking at your own-
Peace~
James

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJeff on May 4, 2006 10:15:01 PM Report
James, you never fail to amaze me with your writings. You are what good writers are measured by.

Jeff
Comment By: FreePoetic Soldier on May 2, 2006 07:51:13 AM Report
Hmmm makes me think about how much I have complained recently, Maybe I should track back a bit ah, Good poem James

Nathaniel
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on April 30, 2006 05:13:32 AM Report
Magnificent write! These words are quite moving.
Your creative mind is beyond the norm!
Highly Insightful Inspirational Piece!
Fletch
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on April 29, 2006 07:53:31 PM Report
Great Job James!
Damon
Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on April 28, 2006 09:32:32 AM Report
excellent piece and so true, keep up the wonderful work.
Comment By: FreeGlata on April 28, 2006 08:22:22 AM Report
Dear James...
Once more you've hit square in the middle and nailed this down perfectly. TOOOO often I've felt totally at a loss as to what to say to someone when they're facing difficult or devastating situations. Some days are just too difficult to express away with words...That's when actions speak louder. A hug or a smile can go farther than all the words in the world...And I agree with Karen...those dark days tend to make us stronger, better people.
Hugs, my brother!
Your NC sister...
Glata
Comment By: FreeKAREN on April 24, 2006 11:38:13 AM Report
Your words in this poem are so very true. Not every day is going to come out smelling like a rose. That would make life too easy. As the old saying goes, there has to be darkness before there can see light. I guess it all depends on how we handle the darker days in our lives. Some of our darker moments are what makes us the strongest..

Karen
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on April 24, 2006 10:44:48 AM Report
Never a truer word spoken James, I for one feel humbled when I see the things some have to put with in this life, and feel grateful for my lot.




 


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