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Author Name: Adminrich53 19 Comments
Date Added: April 22, 2006 23:04:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A Walk In Your Garden




 

A walk in your garden reminds me,
How you touch all my senses.
I feel alive and reborn.
Never do I wish to leave.

I tingle anytime you're near.
My butterflies play in your flowers,
Toes dance in your grass.
Excitement such as I've never known grows.

You are a feast for my longing eyes.
Hair kissed by old Sol as I remember,
Fireflies sparkle in your eyes.
Flowers bow whenever you smile.

You speak and rest my soul's waves.
Filtering through flowered trees,
Like the most dulcet breeze, your voice,
Soothing, 'til your reflection I become.

You appeal to my mind, my reason.
The order in your life so abundant.
Roots sturdy, loving branches,
Each and every leaf and flower so dear.

You are so graceful and delicate.
The way you move and bend with the wind.
Always rising into the spring sun,
Mischevious, looking to share some fun.

You rival all the many blossoms,
With sweet fragrance unique to you.
Each breath brings living memory inside,
And makes me feel so alive.

Yes, you are a feast for my eyes,
One of a kind, a beautiful princess.
To remark of your beauty, insufficient,
There is no comparison to you.

Humbly, you smile and disagree,
And tell me I just can't see.
But my dear, I've walked your garden enough,
To see beyond your beautiful image.

How you carefully tend your garden,
Assisting growth in important ways.
How you love and just what you stand for,
Truly are the most impressive things of all.

You appeal to me on so many levels,
Through my senses and in inexpressible ways.
A walk in your garden reminds me,
How important you are to so many more than me.

Author's Notes:

Written in the wee morning hours, 4/23/06.

"Sakura" courtesy of Ryan Bliss - http://www.digitalblasphemy.com/
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Comments:
Comment By: FreesHeRi on April 13, 2010 07:14:44 PM Report
This poem is as beautiful as the picture..wow, two breath taken pieces of art combined to take a person to a place of paradise and ultimate dreams.

 

Wonderful Rich!

Comment By: FreeCathy on June 6, 2008 07:22:32 AM Report
This poem just takes my breath away WOW!!!  Your beautiful words put the reader in the poem to feel the love embracing them. Going in my favorites thank you.
Cathy

Comment By: FreeSandra M.Hill Veinot on September 15, 2007 04:20:21 PM Report
delicious remarks of the one you love.

a lovely write.

S.~

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on December 4, 2006 11:15:57 PM Report
This is full of adoration for her fine virtues. Your creative expressions hold truth to the light Rich, I think some people do bring new life where it is needed...without even realizing they are doing so. This poem was alive...it sang praise where praise was due. Dear is the heart that can recognize this kind of love and just what a person stands for. This poem offers more than appealing phrases...it offers the readers a peek inside your gracious heart.

Wonderfully done Rich! BRAVO!

~Barbara~


Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on June 6, 2006 12:49:04 AM Report
What a beautiful comparison. The lines are so creative and  conjure such vivid pictures. I really enjoyed this. jp
Comment By: FreeAnna Aliena on June 3, 2006 01:33:10 PM Report
A poem that irradiates warmth and tenderness! Some of its expression shine with a special light: "My butterflies play in your flowers" - wonderful!
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on June 1, 2006 10:04:15 PM Report
Well! Would you just look at that! "My butterflies play in your flowers?" Yikes! "Fireflies sparkle in your eyes?" Holy Cow! Rich, this is exquisite. And to think I was worried about you. I suggest you spend more wee small hours writing. Your song of love simply takes my breath away. Well done, my good man. Auntie
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on May 21, 2006 11:53:50 PM Report
Wonderful read!
The picture is devine!
Excellent write my friend!
Fletch
Comment By: FreeShane Arnold on May 2, 2006 09:09:17 PM Report
this gave me very wonderful thoughts thank you for that
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 29, 2006 09:43:13 PM Report
It's really good to have a site owner who can write poetry.

Man, talk aboutt hook, line, and sinker, buddy!!..This is worship from not too afar..VERY lovely, Rich..len
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on April 27, 2006 09:12:15 PM Report
What a lovely romantic piece for a special lady. Rich, I envy any woman that can have such exquisite words written for her. Such a beautiful poem....exactly the kind I adore reading and you are so good at writing.

~Cindy
Comment By: Freeaaron payne on April 26, 2006 11:52:47 AM Report
very nice. aaron
Comment By: FreeGlata on April 24, 2006 01:42:46 PM Report
Wow, Rich...this is beautiful! She's grabbed your heart and soul, sounds like, and has done wonderful things to them :)
Lovely job...Just awesome picture, too!
Hugs...
Glata
Comment By: FreeJames.A on April 24, 2006 01:07:35 AM Report
An exclusive write Rich
Comment By: PremiumKeith Overstreet on April 23, 2006 06:10:18 PM Report
This is a beautiful and tender piece.
One she will cherish always.
Beautiful Sir!
Comment By: FreeTracy Fletcher on April 23, 2006 10:17:42 AM Report
This is absolutely breathtaking. Your love shines through every word.
Tracy
Comment By: PremiumAnn on April 23, 2006 08:54:42 AM Report
Beautiful work Rich, every line is better than the last....
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 23, 2006 08:06:04 AM Report
RICHARD,
THIS IS BREATHLESS... AS I READ THIS TO BE LOVED LIKE THIS...ANY WOMAN COULD NOT LOVE YOU..I KNOW THIS MAKES MY HEART FLUTTER LIKE BUTTERFLIES.. LOVELY TO READ FIRST THING THIS MORNING.. THIS LADY SOUNDS LIKE THE LOVE OF YOUR LIFE..HUGS ~ SHE
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on April 23, 2006 06:42:13 AM Report
Richard~

This is simply exquisite...

A poem to melt any womans heart~

This is...indescribably beautiful! :)

I loved this!

All the best~
Pamela





 


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