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Author Name: Moderatorhnk903 6 Comments
Date Added: April 18, 2006 09:04:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A pass on love

A chance at love, don't let it pass
It can be as fleeting as the blink of an eye
I know, because it was laid before me
Like a fool, I let it walk on by

I ignored all of the telltale signs
That feeling of weakness in the knees
Love just blew right on by
Left me lonely in the wake of it's breeze

Couples walk together on sun splashed days
Hearing the music of love's song
My ears are deaf to the sound of that tune
Somehow, somewhere I've gone wrong

I pray that love presents itself again
This time, I will hear the sound of it's voice
I've really no one to blame but myself
All this time I've been lonely by choice

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeTessa on May 11, 2006 08:37:35 PM Report
I can so relate to this piece. Great write and expression of feelings.
Tessa
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on April 24, 2006 06:26:22 PM Report
Awwwww...I guess we feel this way sometimes.

Keep the faith Henry, I am sure what is destined for you, your happiness will come just when you need it and least expect it.

Lovely penning my friend.

Best wishes,
Pamela
Comment By: FreeAdri on April 20, 2006 06:44:35 AM Report
I know what you are talking about. I can relate so much. In the end we are all classic fools. Love the poem, very to the point, very brutally honest.
Adri

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on April 19, 2006 08:36:52 AM Report
Henry, life is too short to deny yourself love....but then again it can be complicated, this thing called love. Loved this write because I think it is something we all do sometimes....loved your honesty and expression in this one.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 18, 2006 11:05:21 PM Report
HENRY, THIS IS A HEARTFELT POEM.. HOW WE ALL WONDER AND THE LONGING.. GREAT POEM ~ SHE
Comment By: FreeGlata on April 18, 2006 09:55:58 AM Report
Wow! This one is so sad, Henry! I've seen the heart you display in your writes, and I know that you'd never let love walk by without giving it all you had...
Here's to sunshine in your days and joy in your nights...
Hugs...
Glata




 


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