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Author Name: Freebluefish 4 Comments
Date Added: March 31, 2006 22:03:12 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Not Enough To Make A Difference

i am cold

but not enough

to make a difference

oh sibling sky

the cloak is threadbare

i fear.

i shiver without a sleeve or collar

for my hidden virtue and my words

are kept for prayers

for threads cannot debate their weave.

cover my shoulders winds

as the hairs of my head curl

brother mountain

hide me in the shadows of your slumber

sister moon cast not light

upon my paths

for my words like fox

in the hedges

question without the prancing paw of answers..

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeHeike on April 1, 2006 06:48:54 PM Report
Andrew, I feel you're going to places far beyond where we don't dare to tread, and bring us plentiful images from there.
Loved the line "for threads cannot debate their weave".
~Heike
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on April 1, 2006 10:15:13 AM Report
Andrew~
Lovely write..
I like the descriptions through-out this write very much..
Blessings~
(*Moon~
Comment By: TrialAnn on March 31, 2006 11:45:34 PM Report
The last two lines are wonderful. Nice work as always Andrew.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 31, 2006 10:48:31 PM Report
ANDREW, THIS POEM IS VERY INTERESTING WITH A POINT YOU ARE SAYING I THINK TO HER??TO HOLD YOU IN THE SHADOWS OF HER SLUMBER?? JUST BEAUTIFUL MY FRIEND..HUGS ~ SHE




 


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